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Walk Like An Egyptian

  • by zzzonkout
  • posted Nov 08, 2011
  • 11 Comments

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zzzonkout

Just seeing if you'd wear this or not...if it's a good idea for a submission. Leave comments and the link to yours and I'll critique in return. Thanks!

tomgreever

I'm a guy, so I personally would not wear a shirt with a big red heart and a girl in a pink dress, but maybe that's just me! The illustration is nice, but I feel like there's too much cleavage. Not that there's anything wrong with cleavage, but at that level I think we'd see nipple by now. So I say button her up a bit more. :)

Would you mind giving me feedback on mine too?

dawliet

what does her pose means?

zzzonkout

heehee good idea. It's "walk like an egyptian"

clawerly

Maybe if you had some more old-timey people in a line doing the same? Heart = turn off for guys.

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