"Soldier Of The Great Empire" up force scoring!
Hi everyone!
Firstly: Is this design is successful and clear?
Secondly : I haven't find a good title, yet. Have you an idea, guys?
Hi everyone!
Firstly: Is this design is successful and clear?
Secondly : I haven't find a good title, yet. Have you an idea, guys?
reags
What's the chinese characters read?
SKYLINR
The japanese character "ストーム" (katakana alphabet) mean "storm". The concept is to mix the Storm Trooper with Japanese culture: calligraphy cut by a katana.
reags
Ah gotcha. Well, looks pretty good to me. I did a similar design last year which was declined (Lucas copyright) but this one could be subtle enough to pass.
SKYLINR
Thank you for the encouragement, Reags! I imagine that's Storm Troopers' design are pretty spread. but it's the first for me ;)
SKYLINR
oooh, my english is pretty bad today
SKYLINR
Update! I think it's more efficient like that. I still have no title... Maybe "Calligraphic Trooper"
quick-brown-fox
It's cool, nice idea. What about something like soldier of the great empire?
SKYLINR
Thank you Q! "Soldier of the Great Empire" sounds good... Japan was an empire for a long time
Tony Centeno
Great work man! and "Soldier of the Great Empire" sounds good for me too ;)
SKYLINR
Thanks Tony
SKYLINR
boomp
ibeenthere
maybe lose the japanease reference in the title, cause it's very well drawn and clear...so how about "ink in the storm" "dark space" (which is also a design ref - negetive space which referes to white on black) for japanease titlte maybe "storm shogun" "white samurai" (because samurai are warriors who defend their master said in a deep voice and a deep bow) :)
epikheart
This is awesome! I hope it gets made in to a tee, I would definitely buy it!
SKYLINR
Thanks a lot!
@ibeenthere : I think it's cool to keep a japanese reference. Thanks for your suggestion there are welcome. For now, "Soldier of the Great Empire" is my favorite.
But your suggestions made ​​me think of "Inked Trooper". Is it a good english?
SKYLINR
Pending approval!
About the title: I opted for the idea of ​​quick-brown-fox, thanks you.
SKYLINR
... but I screwed up by typing the title
queenmob
hahaha that always happens to me. E-mail Rachel, she'll help you.
great idea!
SKYLINR
Ahah, thanks Anna-Maria!
I emailed Rachel. I hope that her ray gun will break this error.
SKYLINR
Title fixed :) Thanks Rachel
SKYLINR
It's up!!!
faerielfire
Sorry but the extension between 'トâ€' and â€ãƒ †needs to be vertical. Great design otherwise.