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Three color print.rnMy first t-shirt design for Threadless!rnI want some good critiques please. You wont hurt my feelings.
i think the dino should be not so close to the shoulder. maybe bring it down and in just a touch. The smoke is cool, but i feel it should extend all the way to the jet pack flare. and consider adding some color to the jet pack too.
I agree with bio-bot on moving the t-rex closer towards the center or at least not so high near the shoulder, I think the smoke looks fine being as distant as it is from the jet pack flame, but I would also agree that adding a little more color is a good idea
I agree with the above. Think it would be awsome as a kids T
Would love your feedback http://www.threadless.com/critique/77557/A_mellow_exchange_of_words
Hopefully I fixed the major complaints. Do any little details need work?
Very nice, I like it.
Look my stuff:
I like the minimalistic way of drawing a rocket.
I have my doubts about the perspective of the dinosaurs, but there no need too change that.
would you be so kind to tell me what you think about my design: I Am the Walrus
Thanks for the great feedback! Do you think that the dinosaur drawing itself could be improved?
it looks better u can tweak a little between interface of dino and the smoke
This is awesome man. Looks like something i would buy. Sumbit!
Let me Know what you Think!!!
Would it be improved with a more simple dinosaur? maybe some texture? Or is it really perfect? Thanks again for all the responses!
I wouldn't change a thing. love it
i need all the help i can get http://www.threadless.com/critique/77557/A_mellow_exchange_of_words
I would drop a little more highlights on the rocket just to give it a more metal look and maybe some streak lines coming off of the dinosaurio? lol overall clever idea dude, could you check out my critiques?
Made the rocket shine, fixed the belly stripes, and changed the interface between smoke and flare. What do you guys think??
T Rex rules, that`s really good man!!!!
plz check mine
Submit this design
Comment and score my design.
Haha:D If anything, the hands, feet and front of the closest thigh might benefit from small adjustments, but I really like this!
I'd appreciate your vote on Jungle Duet
this is cute! ready to submit :)
Please critique mine here
Hmm, the arms/hands and legs/feet look sort of awkward.
I changed the legs and arms. Hopefully you guys think it looks better! Tell me what you think.
very cool idea the swirls look awesome and you really made good changes on the dinosaur i dont know what it is but i think the dinosaur needs a lil more detail put in it and im curious to see what the lines would look like wit color but keeeping the white outlining it or maybe dont add anything so it aint to complex but where its at now very good work
if anyone has time please check out mine
Who doesn't like dinos and jet packs?
I think it's ready to go. The difference in style between the dino and the smoke trail work really well in my opinion.
Love the design!
If you have the chance, can you take some time out and critique our design? Thanks!
any ideas how to improve mine?
Thanks for all the positive feedback! Is there anything that I should change before submitting?
I think this is great design. Maybe play around with a little bit more shading on the dinosaur to give it some more depth-- but if that doesn't work with the rest of the design, you should definitely submit this as it is!
Oops, there's supposed to be a "a" in the first line of my comment between is and great. Sorry!
It looks terrific, I'd submit it as it is. Love the color and the different styles blend in very well.
If you have some time please critique on mine
great! ready to submit. :)
Looks good, submit now.
Thanks everyone! Should I add a texture?
No texture, I think it's a nice, clear illustrative style. SUB IT :)
i like submit it
please comment on my design
Nicee T-Rex is fine the way it is. no need for over artsy style imo.
If you have not scored my design, please do so
I most definitely like it...would consider buying it if it was on sale :)
please check my design
I drew a subtle "dinosoaring" in the smoke. Please tell me if you like it better than the last one or not!
I prefer how it looks on version 4.
I agree. Version 4 is better :)
I'm going with v4, but this is some serious beastlyness.
plus the word play is GENIUS
great job man, beauty in simplicity is the best, and you've nailed it here.
if you get a chance, take a peek at my submission thats up for scoring
WAR AND PEACE
if you fancy, you can slap a vote on it! and then if you double fancy you can comment!
good luck on YOUR submission, I'm sure it will do beast.
Thanks guys for your comments! Do you think I should just make the "dinosoaring" lettering unbolded, so that its a hidden feature or just go with the old smoke?
i prefer number four. the soaring word looks kinda "forced in." or yeah, make it "unbolded"
this is soo witty!
if you have time, please drop by and comment on:
I put the design on a person.. I think this is what I'm going to submit, unless anyone has more suggestions!
sub sub sub! ^^
please see mine
I voted on it man, this is good stuff!!!
plz be kind and take a minute to score mine