Rays of Light

tifferlee

on Aug. 4 '10 @ 12:27

RAY GUN! Awesome. What about the rays on the other side of the sun though?

RAY GUN! Awesome. What about the rays on the other side of the sun though?

staffell

on Aug. 4 '10 @ 12:32

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Well the sun decided to focus his energy in this particular direction at this particular moment, so there are none

Well the sun decided to focus his energy in this particular direction at this particular moment, so there are none

clavediseno

on Aug. 4 '10 @ 13:12

wow that actualy cute and neat! :D maybe some one on the bottom getting the ray??? but its a great shirt! can you RATE bananas please?

wow that actualy cute and neat! :D maybe some one on the bottom getting the ray??? but its a great shirt! <a href="http://threadless.com/submission/289593/I_work_for_bananas">can you RATE bananas please?</a>

andenes.magnus

on Aug. 4 '10 @ 16:24

Hahahaha! I think clavediseno is right. You should add someone in the bottom being hit by the rays. :D

Hahahaha! I think clavediseno is right. You should add someone in the bottom being hit by the rays. :D

staffell

on Aug. 4 '10 @ 20:45

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Bump, thanks guys! Will work on it somemore

Bump, thanks guys! Will work on it somemore

NGee

on Aug. 4 '10 @ 20:48

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Maybe haltone the rays so that they fade out at the ends. If you have time, please check my newest design

Maybe haltone the rays so that they fade out at the ends. If you have time, please check my newest design

staffell

on Aug. 4 '10 @ 20:57

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That's a good idea, something is definitely bothering me about the solid rays

That's a good idea, something is definitely bothering me about the solid rays

desene.anna

on Aug. 4 '10 @ 21:36

Very nice idea! Work a little on the solid rays, and just sub it! It looks great already! Weee! Score and comment mine? Please :) Breakfast Mosquito Biker

Very nice idea! Work a little on the solid rays, and just sub it! It looks great already! Weee! Score and comment mine? Please :) <a href="http://www.threadless.com/submission/289518/Breakfast">Breakfast</a> <a href="http://www.threadless.com/submission/289508/Mosquito_biker">Mosquito Biker</a>

Placidity

on Aug. 4 '10 @ 21:41

maybe you could add like a small city or earth in the bottom right corner? cause the sun by itself just doesnt seem like enough.. Critification in need! any last thoughts before subbing please :D Galactic Heroes

maybe you could add like a small city or earth in the bottom right corner? cause the sun by itself just doesnt seem like enough.. Critification in need! any last thoughts before subbing please :D <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73871/Galactic_Heroes">Galactic Heroes</a>

Placidity

on Aug. 4 '10 @ 21:44

left corner*

left corner*

staffell

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 3:55

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I wanted to make this a bit more interesting than the sun just zapping random objects, so I thought it could be burning the actual tshirt. Thoughts?

I wanted to make this a bit more interesting than the sun just zapping random objects, so I thought it could be burning the actual tshirt. Thoughts?

staffell

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 3:55

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staffell

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 4:00

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You say it needs work, but what am I supposed to do to it??

You say it needs work, but what am I supposed to do to it??

3DZukini

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 4:06

I lol'd a bit :) Might look weird, but what if the holes were flesh colored instead of white.... dark, burnt flesh color maybe? Look at mine? Origin of Sasquatch

I lol'd a bit :) Might look weird, but what if the holes were flesh colored instead of white.... dark, burnt flesh color maybe? Look at mine? <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73816/Origin_of_Sasquatch">Origin of Sasquatch</a>

staffell

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 7:20

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^

^

fourwordslash

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 7:43

HAHAH! This is awesome. But I do think the laser guns should be more colourful. Like these: http://cache.io9.com/assets/resources/2008/03/rayguns.jpg

HAHAH! This is awesome. But I do think the laser guns should be more colourful. Like these: http://cache.io9.com/assets/resources/2008/03/rayguns.jpg

staffell

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 10:00

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bump

bump

staffell

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 10:01

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Gonna try it with more detailed and differently coloured rayguns next.

Gonna try it with more detailed and differently coloured rayguns next.

staffell

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 11:51

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last bump before bed - will resume tomorrow

last bump before bed - will resume tomorrow

Mrcoffeebean

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 12:48

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I like the simple cute! maybe youon on dark or blue Tee?

I like the simple cute! maybe youon on dark or blue Tee?

MaGoogals

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 12:54

Great idea, are you going to add more planets, satellite, space lab, UFO? :) Looks great so far, best of luck. CrateMan Needs Your Help

Great idea, are you going to add more planets, satellite, space lab, UFO? :) Looks great so far, best of luck. <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73266/CrateMan">CrateMan Needs Your Help</a>

mreisel

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 12:55

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I'd like to see the earth have it's hands up, trying to shield itself from the rays, or holding some clouds out in front of itself. Great work!

I'd like to see the earth have it's hands up, trying to shield itself from the rays, or holding some clouds out in front of itself. Great work!

PolyphonicScience

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 12:59

Hah! This is great, I agree with making the ray guns a little more colorful though. I assume the rest of the rays are going to be aimed toward planets as well, or astronauts or something? If you get a chance could you please critique my design too?? http://www.threadless.com/critique/73711/Wrapped_Up

Hah! This is great, I agree with making the ray guns a little more colorful though. I assume the rest of the rays are going to be aimed toward planets as well, or astronauts or something? If you get a chance could you please critique my design too?? http://www.threadless.com/critique/73711/Wrapped_Up

ibeenthere

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 13:59

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i like the idea and the pun a lot!:) i do think this needs more details and love!:) for example, the sun seems darker then the rays...which doesn't make sense, and there is no real relations between the sun and the earth, they seem ditached from one another...so definitly have the earth maybe looking and getting sun blinded by, well, the sun lol:) please check out my critique design:Comic ConG and let me know what you think!:)

i like the idea and the pun a lot!:) i do think this needs more details and love!:) for example, the sun seems darker then the rays...which doesn't make sense, and there is no real relations between the sun and the earth, they seem ditached from one another...so definitly have the earth maybe looking and getting sun blinded by, well, the sun lol:) please check out my critique design:<a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73397/Comic_Con_g">Comic ConG</a> and let me know what you think!:)

graf

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 16:30

hahaha... The sun face looks great! check mine

hahaha... The sun face looks great! <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73985/Ghost_Busted">check mine</a>

korrijeanne

on Aug. 5 '10 @ 17:18

awuh cute haha If you have some time, please take a look at my critique and leave a comment! : Pug Life

awuh cute haha If you have some time, please take a look at my critique and leave a comment! : <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73857/Pug_Life#v9">Pug Life</a>

Placidity

on Aug. 6 '10 @ 0:29

ahhh yay, you used the earth idea. looking good. Magic button of mystery!

ahhh yay, you used the earth idea. looking good. <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73871/Galactic_Heroes">Magic button of mystery!</a>

YH2thaLo

on Aug. 6 '10 @ 1:36

I think V3 is really nice. I like the concept! Maybe you could add a moon laughing at the earth. And mabye you could experiment with the amount of rays and planets. Keep up the good work^^!

I think V3 is really nice. I like the concept! Maybe you could add a moon laughing at the earth. And mabye you could experiment with the amount of rays and planets. Keep up the good work^^!

Melawrghk

on Aug. 6 '10 @ 7:12

I'd add a few more planets (like 2) and have their reactions different from Earth's.

I'd add a few more planets (like 2) and have their reactions different from Earth's.

staffell

on Aug. 7 '10 @ 0:29

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staffell

on Aug. 7 '10 @ 0:30

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Need to make the halftones bigger

Need to make the halftones bigger

MaGoogals

on Aug. 7 '10 @ 0:43

Maybe add a vortex on the last one. I think the shorter rays on the previous version work better, while the different lengths look better on this one, nice work, if you get a chnace can you please check out how CrateMan is coming alone :)

Maybe add a vortex on the last one. I think the shorter rays on the previous version work better, while the different lengths look better on this one, nice work, if you get a chnace can you please check out how <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73266/CrateMan">CrateMan</a> is coming alone :)

staffell

on Aug. 7 '10 @ 0:49

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You mean like a black hole? That's a nice idea

You mean like a black hole? That's a nice idea

cescobresco

on Aug. 7 '10 @ 0:55

i like this desig! i whould make the alien spaceship a little bigger and without this "force shield" it has around. I'm Almost There

i like this desig! i whould make the alien spaceship a little bigger and without this &quot;force shield&quot; it has around. <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73676/I_m_Almost_There">I'm Almost There</a>

zetadoble

on Aug. 7 '10 @ 1:57

I think that I would mix the minimalism of the v1 with the guns and the halftones of v4. Personally I prefer the sunshine of v1, happily destructive. All you need is...

I think that I would mix the minimalism of the v1 with the guns and the halftones of v4. Personally I prefer the sunshine of v1, happily destructive. <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/74087/ALL_YOU_NEED_IS_MIND"> All you need is...</a>

SR2010

on Aug. 7 '10 @ 2:14

cool.. i like the details.. especially the guns:) would be cool if you check mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/73940/minephant thanks!

cool.. i like the details.. especially the guns:) would be cool if you check mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/73940/minephant thanks!

kevin10992

on Aug. 7 '10 @ 6:20

Wow this has some potential, for some reason I'm in love with this! I would make the other beam going to an asteroid field or a black hole or something. Great job! If you have time I would appreciate it if you could score my Mario design. Thanks! http://www.threadless.com/submission/290356/An_Unfortunate_Accident

Wow this has some potential, for some reason I'm in love with this! I would make the other beam going to an asteroid field or a black hole or something. Great job! If you have time I would appreciate it if you could score my Mario design. Thanks! http://www.threadless.com/submission/290356/An_Unfortunate_Accident

Winck

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 11:04

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Great idea, nice design. You can check my design? http://www.threadless.com/critique/74121/Serious_Gentleman

Great idea, nice design. You can check my design? http://www.threadless.com/critique/74121/Serious_Gentleman

staffell

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 11:16

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Now with flash file to show placement.

Now with flash file to show placement.

staffell

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 11:17

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how is it looking?

how is it looking?

RicoMambo

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 11:20

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Brilliant, only i would use smaller dots of halftones, but this is probably only me:) Great!!!

Brilliant, only i would use smaller dots of halftones, but this is probably only me:) Great!!!

clavediseno

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 11:24

MAN ITS GETTING SO MUCH BETTER THAT V1 :D that's awesome!, you need to sub this one :D

MAN ITS GETTING SO MUCH BETTER THAT V1 :D that's awesome!, you need to sub this one :D

kevin10992

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 11:34

I love the placement and love where this is going. Def a 5 for me. I would say make the UFO bigger. If you have time I would appreciate it if you could score my Mario design. Thanks! http://www.threadless.com/submission/290356/An_Unfortunate_Accident

I love the placement and love where this is going. Def a 5 for me. I would say make the UFO bigger. If you have time I would appreciate it if you could score my Mario design. Thanks! http://www.threadless.com/submission/290356/An_Unfortunate_Accident

kevin10992

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 11:35

Also I would change the colors of the new planet, it isnt as good as the rest.

Also I would change the colors of the new planet, it isnt as good as the rest.

ibeenthere

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 11:52

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very cool! def a 5! i do agree about enlarging the ufo a little bit:) please check out my critique design:Comic ConG and let me know what you think!:)

very cool! def a 5! i do agree about enlarging the ufo a little bit:) please check out my critique design:<a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73397/Comic_Con_g">Comic ConG</a> and let me know what you think!:)

empiricist

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 11:53

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maybe a black hole sucking up light?

maybe a black hole sucking up light?

staffell

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 12:10

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I tried a black hole, but I wasn't that keen on it. Plus, the black sort of got lost in the navy and it didn't seem right to make it a different colour.

I tried a black hole, but I wasn't that keen on it. Plus, the black sort of got lost in the navy and it didn't seem right to make it a different colour.

empiricist

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 12:15

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maybe have mercury really close up and smoking or just really hot?

maybe have mercury really close up and smoking or just really hot?

staffell

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 20:35

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Bump

Bump

MaGoogals

on Aug. 8 '10 @ 20:46

Coming alone, definatly a better version. Third lucks the charm in asking U to check out. CrateMan

Coming alone, definatly a better version. Third lucks the charm in asking U to check out. <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/73266/CrateMan">CrateMan</a>