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Sorry Jelly there's a new love in town
don't hate me for what i'll say, but...
tbh i just don't see it. i like the ideea and i think it can lead to a tee. but it needs redesign. i dont like the placement and neither the illustration
you should get more oppinions thow, maybe it's just me :)
PS if you have the time, please help me out by giving me your input http://www.threadless.com/critique/72225/the_head_in_the_sky
i like the concept, i would just work on the illustration a bit more, the simple style works for it, it just needs a little bit more sleekness i think, keep at it it would make a good shirt.
I agree with the first 2 comments...
please critique mine:
I agree, i think the idea is there, but the style isn't up to snuff just yet. Work on better placement for the elements. Clean up your lines for each element. It's very difficult to make out the expression of the peanut butter.
Hope this helps
thanx i'll work on it
May I suggest you research the internet for free vector downloads of PB&J jars? There are lots of good common license ones you could modify and use here. Funny idea really but the execution here is very rough and needs to be cleaned up plenty.
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ok I smoothed out the edges, thinned out some of the outlines...changed the eyes on the pb and j, changed the jelly jar...do i need "peanut" on the pb jar? what do you guys think now?
I don't think you need "peanut butter" because it interferes with the smile. I think to make sure people know it's a jar of peanut butter, you could draw a peanut on the cap. I think you could also move the legs of the banana over to the left a bit. It's looking good so far
thanx! will try out your suggestions
Thanks for your vote! :P There IS a certain charm to your drawing really but how about you put this on a white or cream T instead. the blue just doesn't feel right to me. unless, of course, you prefer it this way.
New Color Shirt...No words on the PB jar
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hey Fablucero really like your idea. give it a try and summit it.
thanx E =)
I would add some type of shading. Maybe a simple cell shading, or hatching.
I like this a lot. Its kinda an ironic form of the "BFF" T's with PB and J. I like it.
looks cute :)
please check my critique
i might actually submit this one
any last notes anyone?
i'd wear it just like that! the style of the art work would look weird with shading...
thanx carol =)
love the concept but try to work a little bit the illo.
Cute but not enough to get printed ;D
what do you think it needs?
haha nice, simple and easy!
Much better without the "Peanut," though I think just a touch more detail would help. A crease on the banana and a little shine on the jars, maybe?
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thanx kirby...I sub'd it in but if it gets decline i'll work on your suggestions and sub it again =)
a bit of shading and background design could work. i like your shirt's idea :)
thank you...k well it got denied so I'll work on these things and resubmit it =)
new banana and pb position
maybe put pb and banana in the front?
any opinions on v4 or v5???
Haha, a lil' too phallic for my taste, but it's kinda' funny.
Down on my luck so I'm...
I prefer version 4. Submit that! :)
I dig it... don't put the jelly too far down, maybe off-center but higher. very decent idea - good execution.
i really like what you did. please look at my shirt at http://www.threadless.com/critique/72731/food_raygun
This is hilarious man! great job changing it up, it looks a lot better!
Check out my changes for this one
Please try on blue or white. great!
I think some shading would help a lot. Funny idea!
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add the t-shirts together
I think this is cute and simple :)
But are you planning to have the jelly on the back side and the banana and peanut butter on the front? If that is the case I think it looks great.
My suggestion would be to make the jelly on the back side and the banana and peanut butter on the front, then the shirt looks really cool.
yeah the jelly is on the back....i'm actually working on shadows and highlights...v6 is coming up soon =)
worked on the shades...gave it some dimensionality...picked the light blue shirt....not sure if i should go with this one or the cream....thoughts?