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Hey guys! I'm not sure why but I couldn't submit this version with my other Critique without it screwing up so I just started a new critique... :/ Been awhile since my last update but here is the almost perfected product! :D Let me know what you guys think about colors/placement and also let me know if you think I should add some sound effects to the animation, or if you think its better without any sound. Oh and I was thinking about changing the title to “Cardboard Epiphany” :D I think that has a nice ring to it! :P Anyway thanks for the advice ahead of time! Can’t wait to hear what you guys think! :D
That cool. Submit
I'm up for scoring. Please have a look and score kindly. Leave a comment to tell me what you think
This is so cool!
Any comments are appreciated!!!
Haha I love the starting animation. Your drawing style is so cute too. But I wish there were more cardboard people. :D
If you have time please help me score my design. Thank you!
Really good flash at the start, I also think there should be a couple of more people in the design. NEarly there to submitting tho, looking good!!!!! Ill be voting!
LAST DAY LEFT, please vote!
Nice design, I like it on the brown shirt most.
Nice. Looks ready to sub to me. I would not add sound, it will just distract from your design and annoy people.
This is pretty awesome! I would definitely submit this. Very nice use of colors and keeps the eye interested in every direction. (Also the intro animation was pretty funny haha)
Wanna check mine out?:
I don't know what to say... just.. submit!!!! it's already perfect sound isn't necessary! and I also think that the design could be print on any type of tee-color...
check mine please
lovely ^^ and the colors are pretty
check mine please?
love your choice of colors. its hard to choose a shirt color, but i think i kinda prefer the yellow one (just a fan of yellow shirts ^^)
please don't use sound...i never saw a threadless shirt with sound i think...and maybe thats for a good reason.
I'm also not sure if the intro is necessary...don't get me wrong - its cool and a nice idea...but there could be some people, which are just flicking trough the votings and skip your nice shirt, because it takes too long to show the real deal...just consider that
but i wish you good luck on this - hit me when its up for voting :D
Comments on mine are more than welcome
Awesome Job! Looks great in the brown. Nice selection of colors also. SUBMIT!
I love the colors! What's the green goo? I say submit!! Would you check mine if you get a chance? http://www.threadless.com/critique/69140/Late_Night_Study
Thanks for the compliments and avice everyone!!! :D
i like it on the brown the best. love the colors and the placement!
could ya help me out with mine?
Thanks for your comments on mine
the colours are really nice, brown is best I think!
really cute! i like it on yellow! :)
really nice work
Nice work. I especially like it on yellow. Don't know what else you could add. Submit.
deff submit! really cool and fun design!
Thanks for all the support everyone :) I am currently in the process of figuring out all the promotional stuff I wanna do, like facebook, youtube, and whatnot so i can get as many people to score it as possible. Sooo any ideas on how i could get the design attention would be greatly appreciated!!! :D
squirrel likes it. SUBMIT
looks pretty cool!
Any promotional ideas? :/
i like it too!
check on my sub
This is pretty SWEET!
nice animation sweet design submit and win!!!
I like the brown shirt more than the yellow one. Great stuff!!
By the way, I have a new version of my critique, if you wanna check it out :)
Thanks and good luck!
$weet indeed ;) i would go for the yellow shirt and submit ;)
And u ask for promotioal ideas? any social media would work i think, the blogs here at Threadless, Deviantart, Facebook, Twitter etc. :)
Can i get you to drop a awesome comment at my submission, if u got a minute?
"Browse 4 cookies"
It needs your support ;)
okay, im in the final stages of making this ready to submit! :D I just have to get everything set up for promotional stuffs then I will submit it and leave the link here! Can't wait for you guys to score it! :D
ok I'm gonna go out and say it looks terrible on brown and yellow. I'd steer away from putting it on one of the colours in the design also.
Okay, then what would you suggest?
Hey guys!!! :D My design is finally up and running for scoring!!! I'm super excited and I hope some of you get this message so you can go vote :] Thanks for all your guys' help and i cant wait to see how this goes!!!
Here is the link:
i. love. this.
if you wouldnt mind rating mine i would really appreciate it!!
this is amazing!
i say sub!
Please score my design: Bearminator
really cool, but feeling obligated to say something constructive you could have cardboard clouds raining rainbow patterns?
check out my post if you have some time