[wip] The Early Bird Catches The Worm

Jennifuhrer

on June 18 '06 @ 20:03

ADORABLE but the early worm gets eaten :-(

ADORABLE<br /> <br /> but the early worm gets eaten :-(

pilihp

on June 18 '06 @ 20:04

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yup... that why you should alway be late :) bad things happen when you try to be on time.

yup... that why you should alway be late :) bad things happen when you try to be on time.

montmont

on June 18 '06 @ 20:05

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perhaps move the worm closer to the hole, and the bird, put that on more of an angle towards the hole, just a bit, or adjust the eye so it looks like it is looking down otherwise, cute factor is maximised

perhaps move the worm closer to the hole, and the bird, put that on more of an angle towards the hole, just a bit, or adjust the eye so it looks like it is looking down<br /> <br /> otherwise, cute factor is maximised

Ellsswhere

on June 18 '06 @ 20:05

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that is actually wuite funny.. just because ive never seen a worm wearing a hat and tie and he just seems so damn excited to go off to work

that is actually wuite funny.. just because ive never seen a worm wearing a hat and tie and he just seems so damn excited to go off to work

realslimnatey

on June 18 '06 @ 20:06

oh man, thats great as it is! poor worm is all happy going to work...

oh man, thats great as it is! poor worm is all happy going to work...

pilihp

on June 18 '06 @ 20:08

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montmont i'll try tilting the bird down. thanks :) nate it's a cruel cruel world out there :(

<b>montmont</b> i'll try tilting the bird down. thanks :)<br /> <br /> <b>nate</b> it's a cruel cruel world out there :(

sinople

on June 18 '06 @ 20:24

A little more color. Make the worm green and maybe an item or 2 in the hole yellow. Then it would be $5.

A little more color. Make the worm green and maybe an item or 2 in the hole yellow. Then it would be $5.

NatySpaghetti

on June 18 '06 @ 20:26

i feel like i want to see some texture of any kind really with the dirt, or with the bird maybe? or maybe the background?...something interesting should happen around the bird.. well thats my opinion

i feel like i want to see some texture of any kind really<br /> with the dirt, or with the bird maybe? or maybe the background?...something interesting should happen around the bird..<br /> <br /> well thats my opinion

pilihp

on June 18 '06 @ 20:29

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i agree... but i just don't know what :(

i agree... but i just don't know what :(

mahalov

on June 18 '06 @ 21:01

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haha this is amazing i'de buy it in a second if printed

haha this is amazing<br /> i'de buy it in a second if printed

NatySpaghetti

on June 18 '06 @ 21:05

i think i cant relate to it because i dont see any expresion of anticipation on the poor ol worm he could be peeking, or about to come out, or maybe the bird is waiting with a huge sneeky smile...i dunno

i think i cant relate to it because i dont see any expresion of anticipation on the poor ol worm<br /> <br /> <br /> he could be peeking, or about to come out, or maybe the bird is waiting with a huge sneeky smile...i dunno

NatySpaghetti

on June 18 '06 @ 21:06

*on the bird i mean

*on the bird i mean

pilihp

on June 18 '06 @ 21:33

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the worm isn't expecting to be eaten... he's happy and oblivious to the world outside.

the worm isn't expecting to be eaten... he's happy and oblivious to the world outside.

NatySpaghetti

on June 18 '06 @ 21:34

yea, i messed that up, i meant the bird like hes waiting there, he cant wait to eat !

yea, i messed that up, i meant the bird<br /> like hes waiting there, he cant wait to eat !

hey2thecow

on June 18 '06 @ 21:36

Awww so cute. I think the bird needs a red bandana. Dunno why...Just seems...right.

Awww so cute. I think the bird needs a red bandana. Dunno why...Just seems...right.

pilihp

on June 18 '06 @ 23:41

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minor update :)

minor update :)

montmont

on June 18 '06 @ 23:43

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hmm, I dont think it needs the text at all if you want to get the message across more, maybe give the bird a watch on one of its wings, so its looking at the time? Looks better with that slight tilt and the textures are nice.

hmm, I dont think it needs the text at all<br /> <br /> if you want to get the message across more, maybe give the bird a watch on one of its wings, so its looking at the time?<br /> <br /> Looks better with that slight tilt and the textures are nice.

pilihp

on June 18 '06 @ 23:51

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yah, i'm usually not a fan of text on shirts... i just threw it on there for right now because i feel like it needs a background. i'll take a look at it again tomorrow with fresh eyes.

yah, i'm usually not a fan of text on shirts... i just threw it on there for right now because i feel like it needs a background. i'll take a look at it again tomorrow with fresh eyes.

sinople

on June 19 '06 @ 1:39

It works. I would have made the worm green, but this works as well.

It works. I would have made the worm green, but this works as well.

5115

on June 19 '06 @ 2:52

Aw. Lol. Thats really cute!

Aw. Lol. Thats really cute!

Auro

on June 19 '06 @ 3:07

I agree with Sinople, try the worm in green.

I agree with Sinople, try the worm in green.

ecky_ducky

on June 19 '06 @ 3:15

Hmmmm there's something about that worm that's grating with me. Maybe it's that I like the bird just with eyes. Perhaps I would prefer Mr Worm without a mouth. But otherwise, it's snazz.

Hmmmm there's something about that worm that's grating with me.<br /> Maybe it's that I like the bird just with eyes.<br /> Perhaps I would prefer Mr Worm without a mouth.<br /> But otherwise, it's snazz.

pilihp

on June 19 '06 @ 6:10

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i'll try the green, it might look like a slug though. should i keep the text? i'm still trying to think of something for the background.

i'll try the green, it might look like a slug though.<br /> <br /> should i keep the text? i'm still trying to think of something for the background.

pilihp

on June 19 '06 @ 7:24

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la la la

la la la

pilihp

on June 19 '06 @ 21:58

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i played around with color and a simple background. whaddya think?

i played around with color and a simple background. whaddya think?

stingerstyler

on June 19 '06 @ 22:16

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I think you could do without the text

I think you could do without the text

jublin

on June 19 '06 @ 23:02

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i actually really like the one that says The Early Bird and then The Worm... sans "catches" maybe if the words were a little less prominent like they are in the second it might work a bit better, but then again... people are always going to say "lose the text!"

i actually really like the one that says The Early Bird and then The Worm... sans "catches" <br /> <br /> maybe if the words were a little less prominent like they are in the second it might work a bit better, but then again... people are always going to say "lose the text!"<br />

badtz313

on June 20 '06 @ 0:05

I like the criss-crossy look for the text.

I like the criss-crossy look for the text.<br />

NatySpaghetti

on June 20 '06 @ 0:13

heey the textures did make it better! all those years of school worth something! hehe the first one looks way better, im digging it. About the letters, i dont mind them at all ;)

heey the textures did make it better! all those years of school worth something! hehe<br /> <br /> the first one looks way better, im digging it. About the letters, i dont mind them at all ;)

Philzer

on June 20 '06 @ 0:39

Brilliant! This is really funny... ohhh! The poor worm gets gulped. Ah well. I like the way the bird has a napkin on- great!

Brilliant! This is really funny... ohhh! The poor worm gets gulped. Ah well. I like the way the bird has a napkin on- great!