So, I like this design but I'm embarrassed to admit that I feel as if I don't "get it."
Is the B for birds? What does the title have to do with the image?
I feel like there's a central idea or concept here but I've missed it. As far as the design goes, I'm not a huge fan of those clouds. Maybe go for cooler black outlined clouds to go with the blacked-out silhouetted birds.
Cheers!
So, I like this design but I'm embarrassed to admit that I feel as if I don't "get it."<br />
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Is the B for birds? What does the title have to do with the image?<br />
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I feel like there's a central idea or concept here but I've missed it. As far as the design goes, I'm not a huge fan of those clouds. Maybe go for cooler black outlined clouds to go with the blacked-out silhouetted birds.<br />
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Cheers!
Actually it has to do with the birds flying in a V-shape to cut across the wind, do you think I should add a flying-v bunch of birds so to be understood by looking at it? Thanks!
Actually it has to do with the birds flying in a V-shape to cut across the wind, do you think I should add a flying-v bunch of birds so to be understood by looking at it? Thanks!
Yeah, throw in 1 or 2 v-formations in the background. I didn't get it until I read the titel. Maybe have the sky part bigger or on a blue tee.
Like the idea.
Family Portrait
Yeah, throw in 1 or 2 v-formations in the background. I didn't get it until I read the titel. Maybe have the sky part bigger or on a blue tee.<br />
Like the idea.<br />
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haha! funny idea, but i agree with the others. a couple vees would be good.
Love Knows No Bounds
haha! funny idea, but i agree with the others. a couple vees would be good. <br />
<a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/54501/Love_Knows_No_Bounds">Love Knows No Bounds </a><br />
... another way to convey the concept of dyslexia would be to maybe have a v of birds going in one direction and a single bird going the opposite way? i really like your clouds though! very cute, remind me of mario haha
... another way to convey the concept of dyslexia would be to maybe have a v of birds going in one direction and a single bird going the opposite way? i really like your clouds though! very cute, remind me of mario haha
It looks good, I would try 2 do something with the back to really make it seem lke it belongs in the back bczu the B could be on a front of a shirt depending on where u live so. That would b my suggestion.
It looks good, I would try 2 do something with the back to really make it seem lke it belongs in the back bczu the B could be on a front of a shirt depending on where u live so. That would b my suggestion.
Funny! I think it would be a better read if you saw the B & Vs on the front. I also think your V's are too dense with birds. Birds usually only fly in single file.
Cool idea.
Funny! I think it would be a better read if you saw the B & Vs on the front. I also think your V's are too dense with birds. Birds usually only fly in single file.<br />
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Cool idea.
i think it takes too long to get the joke, by that time i've walked way past you
please give this design your opinion
i think it takes too long to get the joke, by that time i've walked way past you<br />
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lol, i like the idea... the two different styles of clouds are kind of distracting though. Another thing that comes to mind is the thicker (more birds together) letter than the usual one bird width V. It would also benefit more from being placed on an actual tee model.
lol, i like the idea... the two different styles of clouds are kind of distracting though. Another thing that comes to mind is the thicker (more birds together) letter than the usual one bird width V. It would also benefit more from being placed on an actual tee model.
I really like the style of this an all. I think its ready for submission. I really like the looks of it on the t-shirt too. Well done!
Could you check out my design please?
I really like the style of this an all. I think its ready for submission. I really like the looks of it on the t-shirt too. Well done! <br />
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