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Two colors designHope that you like itI need feedback about this concept!Thanks
Two colors design
Hope that you like it
I need feedback about this concept!
Wow, really cool!
I don't know what to say expect that I like it!
Maybe give some guns to the sheriff...and also, I first thought his moustache was in fact his mouth...don't know if you can change that...
Can you help me on my design??
A key to Nature
This is so-oo cool! a definite winner!
but i agree - guns for the sheriff would be a good option.
I think it's funking brilliant.
My only suggestions is the sheriffs lower lip might look better curved and should he have a gun? Perhaps firing it towards the sky!
A bird on top of a cactus might be a nice touch.
Look forward to seeing the development :)
Oh it is a moustache! then I would curl the ends or make it more of a handle bar style.
I think this design doesn't work on a T-shirt... Maybe it's better keep this as a print
you seem to enjoy using lots of little creatures in your designs :P
this looks great, can't think of anything left to improve.
PLS SCORE MINE
and have a look at this
overread your second post...you're right, there's a problem with the grass on the ground. can't you make it a belt print or does the whole design to have only 1 color then?
Are you kidding..looks great on a tee! Sub it!
i think this is awesome and i love the colour scheme
i would think of subbing it so that it doens't look like it goes over on to the shirt sleeve as that will avoid any potential print issues.
one thing - alot of the characters hve the same mouths and they seem to be on the same side of the shirt too (guys on the left all have lips pursed, three guys on the right all have grimaces with teeth showing)
it sounds petty and maybe it is, but looking through the characters, it can get a bit repetative - maybe shuffle them up slightly?
please vote on vincent and I also have a guess the score comp going with a guaranteed $25 GC prize!
this is awesome, definitely works on a tee
I think it's awesome! Sub!
Please crit mine!
i'm not sure about the placement
ahahah very nice! I love this style! ready to submit!
please crit mine:
Funny Rodeo v3
this is so awesome! but ah maybe color the sheriff yellow or his badge yellow or some other coloring to make it easier to tell that he's different from the bad guys. i like how his hat's the shape of a cactus, but i don't know why it's the color of a cactus.
(and ya sherrif stand out a bit more (yellow badge or dif color hat))
I like the idea, perhaps some shadows would add a bit. I agree with cARtOoNer, some difference to the sherrif would help. If you wouldn't mind, look at my design
what about making a black hat and green body?
I think the sherif is fine. If you want to make him stand out a bit more make his hat and badge a little bigger. Great work!
I would appreciate your thoughts on this design!
I don't know? I would kinda like to see the sherifs hat in another colour. Or maybe just make the badge bigger and a gold colour?
I could use some advice on my geek sub!
i would love to see a yellow gold on the sheriff. maybe even on a couple of smaller details too???
placement looks fine but maybe try randomize the grass edges a bit so it doens't look so square on the shirt?
can you give me some help on this please
I've added the drop shadows
i love it. i think it's ready, but don't take my word.
This is looking brilliant - -$0 good!!!!
My only comment is the repetition of mouths, particularly when characters are close together.
Can you come up with a few more expressions?
do you like the drop shadows? because it's difficult to do with only two colors
I love it, especially because it's made with so little color.
Please critique mine:
All it takes is one...
This is great.
As far as the drop shadow, can't you just do a 20-40% opacity with the back? Still two colors no?
Please critque mine
Return of Musclestache
looks great!, but i agree with thepapercrane about trying different mouths
any suggestions for my lavalamp?
Sweet design, I like the simplicity of it
added a couple of new mouths
Yes you r so nearly there I feel, but just give the one with the cash a different mouth as the one right next to him has exactly the same. Maybe a big grin as he has the dough?
Then I think it is ready
Great job. I will definitely 5$ it!!!!
Best of luck :)
Ps still think a little, bemused looking, desert type bird perched somewhere would be nice :)
I'd still like to see a little bit bigger and gold coloured sheriffs badge.
A sheriff wearing a black hat goes against western film conventions but gold star could fix that (sorry, I'm a film nerd.)
If you have a moment my Loves Geeks Design is up for scoring. Let me know what you think!
I love the concept.
but when i saw this i thaugt i would be realy funny if the guy whit the bag of money is sneaking away while the rest is hiding for the sheriff.
this was just a thing popped in my mind.
For the rest i like it.
Could you if you have time take a look at my design
i love it already but i think if all of them have green lips they would look more awesome,me give it 5$ too !
For some reason the green lips bother me. Introducing gold to the colour of the sheriffs star would be cool as long as you don't add it anywhere else. Still love this design!
Plan of A Tack
Watch What You Eat
Hey this is great!! HAHA I was cracking up. Only one thing I would change besides what others have said...I would steer clear of making this design a box shape. Maybe you could make the edge of the entire design irregular instead of a square. Otherwise, I love this!
I can't believe this hasn't been sub'd. It's awesome.
Please crit mine!
yes this is totally cool!
Would love to hear your comment on my Skully Hearts design, Thanks!
I like this! For both Tshirt and canvas.
maybe try do the shadows in black?
but hey, i like it how it is, maybe the black shadows will bring to much contrast.
thanks, any other suggestions?
Good improvement from the start! Not sure what to say anymore, pretty much done I think! Submit I say, GOOD LUCK, ill be voting, its a really nice design! ;)
Comment on my new version!
What about making a back view? Sheriff shows the back and while all the outlaws are hidden behind cactus
Great style! I think you should submit.
I'm not 100% on the back view. I like it, but I think the design looks great as is. The only thing is the box shape that has been brought up before. I can see it working for a print, but I'd like to see a more organic shape on the shirt. Maybe removing some of the grass, and only keeping patches nearest to the shadows.
Would you mind stopping by to critique my work?
Sub this already, it been ages since I last looked at this and have been waiting to see it as a design.