Dweller, Dweller, Body Seller

  • by bengineer
  • posted Sep 05, 2009
  • 42 Comments

This is my first submission. It's come a long way and many of you did a great job supporting me by critique.

It's 7 colors and a gradient on a cream tee.

Hope you like it :)

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bengineer
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This is my first submission. It's come a long way and many of you did a great job supporting me by critique.
It's 7 colors and a gradient on a cream tee.
Hope you like it :)

Bahis

only thing bugging med about this one is that the shadows are a bitt messed up. Love the idea though ;)

Krazy-kim

It looks good, but the shadows do look a little off.

shareyourweb

i like the shadows. lighting seems to be on the side. great idea, very well executed.

isawa

Ya, I commented in critiques about fixing the shadow, oh well...

bengineer
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thx for your comments! @isawa and above posts:
i thought about fixing the shadows and even did in illustrator.
but pls consider that if this gets printed the shirt color will be a little different from the template's one. She shadow is supposed to have a slightly darker color than the shirt. This way it won't look as agressive and dominant as in the presentation. and if i'd made it smaller you'd hardly recognize it on the actual tee. that's why i exaggerated it this way.
hope you get what i mean :)

sausage_moe

yeah. it's up. great first sub! loads of love and a 5 from sausage-country!

bengineer
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thx, hope you like it anyway :P

pindian

5$. rock on dude.

Wihlboy

Think why the shadows look off is because it's under-lit... would make more sense if the shadow was on the underside of things since most lights are above us. Other than that, great concept!

agrimony
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my main grouse is not the shadows but the gradient. it seems pretty unnecessary to me,a halftone would have sufficed, cutting down the number of colors.

8bitcat

I tend to agree about the gradient, but that could easily be fixed. I love the quirky character of this design, and I think the colors are just right, not too bright. Great concept and well executed aside from a few tweaks :)

Tepuy

Nice, i like it...

heldenstuff
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I don't see a problem with the gradient because it is the same grey color used in the tear. No extra color there. Yes, the shadow on the Tee and the shadow on the creature's body have a slightly different angle. But that is an easy fix. This reminds me of the spaghetti scene in Alien. Creepy little creature. Really nice first submission! Keep them coming!

RedRobotMonkey

Well executed. I dont see the big deal about the shadows. I would change the shadow on the ripped part as it contradicts the other shadow, but that is barely noticeable. Overall it looks good, and i don't see anything wrong with it.

Neuroplastcicty

What hasn't been said?
I like the colors, and the shadows are only going to bother those that know what they are talking about. Hope it scores well.

mark722
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pretty nice design, i hope you weren't accusing me of copying it.

bengineer
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no, i didn't, it's alright ;)

ndikol
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cool ;D

voodazz

The added shadows made a big difference.

Freedom Fries

shadows are way off....try .0125....

gary3ndd

Still looks good to me. It's not realistic so the shadow is ok to me.

bengineer
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what's ".0125"?

VegettoGT4


Nice, simple design but very well done.

Pakpandir
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excellent design! creepy too yet simple and well executed. great job dood

JediMasterQuinn

i like it, and the shadows don't bother me in the slightest.
good work.

hotspot

Hi thanks for your comment on my design!
nice work i love orange so this works perfect for me ;-)

bengineer
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well, not too happy about the score but i think it's ok for a first submission :P thx everybody for scoring!

Faduchi

wait, did you say my design was bad?
cause this sucks balls

bengineer
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haha, just saw this comment :P
for anyone who's interested, i didn't say his sub was bad, i just told him it had been done in a very polite way.
Btw: Here's a link to his first sub :D

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