little red RADISH hood

"little red riding hood"...

Really cute! I like it a lot, but I'm not sure about the white path and house, I mean it doesn't look bad, but it doesn't quite sit right with me. Maybe a different background color of the shirt would make this look work better.

Cute :P Only thing I would change is probably taking out the "grandma". But that's just my opinon

do you even need the house?<br /> <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/21587/atomicpalooza"> crit me please</a>

her legs are coming through the soil?? Ok, I get it....maybe only her head should be on top of the dirt.... Cute.. Where's the &quot;big bad wolf&quot;? Chomp

the problem is, it looks as if she is walking along the path while having her legs under the soil, it doesn't make sense, but the technique is good.<br /> <br /> <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/21509/Best_Friends">Please Critique Mine</a>

could be good, having him hiding behind a forest of carrots <br /> <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/21581/Friends">Please Critique Mine</a>

I think the shirt needs to be darker. Can't see the house and path very good. I almost missed it.

ok, thanks! now try to redisign!

I like the carrots with the &quot;big bad wolf&quot; hiding in them. The house sort of looks like a big piece of chocolate cake though with a chocolate river. Grandma is too pale. The carrots need some shading or shadows, perhaps the tops are too full like a tree. Carrot tops are more stringy. Maybe a couple of the little radishes could have some eyes looking longingly to be out of the ground. But it's coming along. I really like the idea.

aw. I like the legs. they made more sense on there.

maybe I found the way...

the concept is really funny, but there's something strange in the colors,mhhh I can't tell you what :\

ehyyy....can you tell me something about?...

v1 is the best. The colours are much nicer there and it's not too busy.

wow. I like this one... maybe try to move the wolf closer... seems like he is hovering inthe sky right now...<br /> <br /> wanna crit <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/21700/Who_s_the_Pope_Now">my shirt</a>

but I think you should go for a brighter shirt since you've got such pastel colours.

ok, thanks!

...UHM, but... what colour?

Hey Briciola! <br /> <br /> I hate it when people say this to me, but V1 is AWESOME! Sometimes you don't mess with perfection, right? :)

okay, there's something wrong in my upload, last version is number 6! now I'm thinking about V1...someone think that it's the best...I'm a bit confuse!<br /> help me!!

omg. that's soo cute!<br /> i like the colors of V1 with the house,<br /> but i like all the characters in your latest.<br /> maybe move the wolf a little closer and more center?<br />

maybe v2 with a wolf behind the trees?

?what do you think now?

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