tall and short

  • by talito
  • posted Feb 21, 2008
  • 27 Comments

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myalienangel

love this one...maybe because i'm kind of partial to giraffes...who knows? the illustration is awesome!

Savrona

Agree. I like the illustration quite a bit, but the text isn't working for me. To me, the font just doesn't jive with your style.
Keep in mind that ellipsis (...) means that the sentence or thought continues. Is there something on the back of the shirt, or something missing that would continue after "and short people..."? I'd try this again, but without the text.

darkdog

loose text yes but drawing are neaT!

BakusPT
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text is ok but another font plz.. Characters are great ;)

BB_freshII

nice illustration! $$

Hero Status

awesome style, now we just need to find somethng worth drawing!
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ZoeChen

cute!!!!

Bunter

you are really talented! :)

Simon Cowell

The illustrations are quite nice, the layout is a bit wonky, and the text could use some work. Also, it just doesn't have that wow factor. The idea behind the shirt design isn't that strong. Sorry.

SoulfumeInc

has anyone mentioned that giraffes and crocs/aligators are both not people?

i like the illustration tho

imrachel.com

Your illustration is top notch! It has atmosphere and character, however, your type font does not. (therefore takes away from the illus.)

If its absolutely needed - hand drawn type!

Also the alligator shadow looks a bit more like excrement.. possilby a bit too dark?

lillie62692

maybe if youre gonna do text it should be like the same general concept but a little more poetic.

shirtflirt

yo that giraffe is sick!

kaitykaits123

...wait...you mean there are tall people AND short people???

hahah sorry a little mean, but yea nix on the text?

abcdefredi

giraffes and crocodiles arn't people
they are giraffes and crocodiles
nice illus... you dont need a lame punchline to make it work!

dozertx

need a differnt, more playful font.

jake barker

straight up lose the text. your illustration is fantastic, keep it up.

aReYouDaft

different text........please.

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