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Take My Hand, Everything's Fine.

  • by travioli
  • posted Jul 05, 2007
  • 45 Comments

First time I've designed with yellow, I'm pretty excited about it.

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travioli

First time I've designed with yellow, I'm pretty excited about it.

charlestheoaf

Pretty nice. This reminds me of the film "You and Me and Everyone We Know"

Ava Adore

great illus! i like the yellow!

nfoley

I'm pretty sure it's a direct reference to YaMaEWK...

Anyway, I like the evaporating hand. I think the placement could be stronger though. The hand is so directional; putting it right in the middle of the shirt kills all of that movement you might get from having a nice asymetrical layout.

FRICKINAWESOME
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As you should be excited about this design...it continues your string of tees i'd love to own! The only thing I would like to see on this shirt is the fire being a much bolder color to stand out from the rest a bit more but not so much to overshadow the hand...i dont mind the placement...4$

mirmo

Awesome 5$

beesknees

I love it on the natural. You can see the design behind the hand whereas I didn't even notice on the extremely yellow shirt.

Verdana

I dig it.

lilyiris

the hand looks too gray on natural. Better on the yellow

Edword
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nice work!

icebar

travioli explain the symbolism and stuff that you said in the critiques
$5

travioli

icebar on Jul 05 '07
it's fine.
only thing i don't get is why there's fire and stuff. but it probably doesn't matter. great job.

travioli on Jul 05 '07
it is a controdiction to the everything's fine statement. The fact that the hand is melting, burning and evaporating is to create a feeling that something is wrong.

doozier

love it definet 5

leucous

I really like this design and would wear it.

Johnny Baboon
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the design is good. i just don't wear yellow. 4

dacat
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I like the yellow actually, looks great with that shading too $5

ruby soho

Awesome! I like it much better on natural though, I really don't like yellow shirts.

ekaj47

nice

AlaskaCannoli

I like the natural a little more, but they are both wonderful!

5- I'd buy it!

That's so creative! :D

travioli

Thanks guys.

Hero Status

i dont get how the firey hand and the text go together. is it take my hand, everything's fine, or take my hand, everything's fire?

maybe i'm missing something

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Kile1

I like the message.

travioli

Everythings fine.

xarmii

I really like this :]

ivywillow

I like the disintegration & the melting effects, but the fire seems wrong somehow...

klayshay

Reminds me of the chemical burn scene in Fight Club. Me likey!

katwyn

I really like it on natural.

Willish

The f looks like a t to me.
However I do love this shirt.
$4
5 if the t is made more obvious.

Jennyliz

This is encouraging. An encouraging gesture. Encouraging words. I'd wear it WITH the yellow. Natural becomes boring after a while; yellow pops. Cool idea! :-)

katalius

This looks like the cover of the Stars album Set Yourself on Fire. Which makes it very awesome.

icebar

the F does not, in any way, look like a T...

travioli

Thanks again for all of the comments! I'm also having a hard time seeing how the f looks like t, but any lack of distinction is easily fixable.

colin_Brights

I love the half tones, text, colors, and illustration together. I'd buy it.

shagg

This is poor taste. I'd hate to see the reaction of someone who actually was burned, like in the 9/11 attacks. 0

icebar

love this more every time i see it.

shagg... :[ what the heck are you talking about??
it's symbolism. the shirt isn't sending a message about burning people.

Sirwootalot

In heaven, everything is fine...

travioli

@shagg: ???????????????????????

welshalex

Lovely, really unusual.

Shagg must be taking the mick, noone is actually that stoopid.

Baron von Aaron

well, I'm a firefighter, and I've been burned plenty of times (steam burns are the WORST), and rest assured that I take no offense to this.

travioli

I was hoping this would score better.

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