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with or without black outlines.
With outlines, otherwise its hard to distinguish the two khaki colors.
definitely without, nice design, i like!
I say without, but with more contrast between the two beiges.
yeah it looks much better without but you need to tweek the colors to give a bit more contract.
what freshview said.
why didn't you crit this first?
WITH!!! (and he did crit this)
"with" adds more depth and definition to the image. I like this a lot!
Without the black lines. It would look better without the black lines if one of the cream/khaki colors were darker. Great job though! 5!
guh i can't make up my mind!! either way $5!
wow, such heavily divided opinion!
good job i put both in ^_^
i prefere it with the black outlines
without. nice :)
with. I like :)
Deffinitly with the black outlines
Definitely without. Without gives it more character. :]
$5 without. 3 with.
without the black lines, definately
with them it look scary.
Definitely with! Love it.
without, if the colours contrasted a bit more so the outlines were defined better (as was mentioned b4), but with the lines if it's gonna be as is. Otherwise, GreAt work
Either way I love it :D
i think its cool with the outlines but not black ones, what about a mid shade brown? something not too dark but enough to contrast with the khaki colors
without looks cuter ! =D
as a note: i personally prefer it without, but due to mixed opinion on the critique i included both.
i prefer without lining.
i like it with the lines, you can define the 2 kakhi colors more. this is really cute!
With, otherwise it's just too anonymous-looking.
with, for sure.
Without with more contrast between the khakis
Better with 5 colors!
WITH MOST DEFINITELY
with the outlines of course...makes the design come out...
let's compromise: make the outlines dropped-out to the shirt color.