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  • by LILMAUI
  • posted Jun 08, 2007
  • 17 Comments

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LILMAUI

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LILMAUI

thanks!!!...
some more comment?
or edvices to make this look better?

BlameTheSuburbs
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work on the speech bubbles- combine them into one that says "arr, lets drink some pirates", redo the text, and make the shape of the bubble less awkward.

alconic

good :)
but i don't like the t and the s of pirates
there is a more thin stroke

LILMAUI

I think that if i do the text in one bubble the t will lose somethong and will be a little empty...
dont you think?

LILMAUI

FIXED TEXT AND MAKE IT SMALLER ON THE T

BlameTheSuburbs
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the text bubbles are still awkward shaped and the text treatment isn't that great. At least redraw "pirates" and "Lets"because those two works are the weird ones. The concept is fine and it'll probably get a decent score.

LILMAUI

thank mate!! ill see what can i do!

more comments?

LILMAUI

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LILMAUI

up
???
someone? something?

shiznat29

i'd give him a little pirate hat like half on so you can still see his bottle cap, other than that love it.

Flying Mouse
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How about add some shadow and lighting for the bottle, it look a bit flat right now.

LILMAUI

fixed text and shadow + light..

that do you think?

LILMAUI

something?!
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Noliewen

I would change the edge of the top bubble a little bit, so it looks smoother like the ARR bubble.

There's something about the face that bothers me, but I can't point it out yet. I think it might be TOO simple. Great progress though.

gutistg

The shadow looks weird on the darker grey.

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