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I really like the ghosts, but not so much the tomb stones.
the last ghost is really hard to see... but i like the bird singing on the tombstone :]
haha, i like this idea
I like the ghosts. I don't like the colors but that's me. It's a bit to simple for me.
Not sure the design works for me but I really like the choice of colours.
I love the ghosts and the idea, but I don't really like the blocks behind the tombstones (also now I see the bird, but they really looked like skyscrapers). Maybe that's just me. Still, 5.
i dont like the colors behind the tombstones.
reminds me of that bit in ghostbusters when all the ghosts go nuts through the city, tres cool design. specially feeling the way the tombstones are visaged.
make the colors behind the tombstones less square and more tombstone-shaped and you've got yourself a winner.
i really like the idea and the feel of your design. the colors are great as well. i think the tombstones could be reworked. i didn't get that they were tombstones at first. i appreciate that they're stylized and not cliche, but if they were a bit more recognizable, i think you'd have a winning design here.
cool thx, can i re-submit this design with different tombstones? is that allowed?
i myself have never really liked my tombstones either.
another great sub! that's 2 for 2, keep 'em coming!
very cute! maybe move the tombstones to the bottom left and make the ghost rainbow higher? just a thought. either way a 5 from me.
i think the end of the ghosts tails shouldnt be so aligned, each one should be close to the tombstone
very nice. never enough tributes to ghosts or graveyards. 4$ (i don't like the way the blocks of color are working behind the tombstones)
I like the ghosts and the concept. The tombstones are a little hard to read at first, though. Unless someone tells you it's ghosts in the graveyard, They could look like skyscrapers at first. Maybe do the tombstones in a similar style to the ghosts'.
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i love it. its got a great design and ghosts, my name sake ( : i give you a 5$ for sure!
The idea is really good... The ghosts just umm... look a little too much like condoms and they look too much like a rainbow... Or well trying to be a rainbow. I do really like the idea, could be awesome with some tweeking. ajsolid84's idea of making the tombstones similar to the ghosts might look better.
very interesting and great color choices
Your stuff is awesome, keep it comming!
Good potentil here for something GREAT! The tombstones need work & since the ghosts seem to be everyone's favorite, I'd suggest changing them to the same style. Perhaps even making the colors of the headstones & ghosts coordinate.
p.s. ghosts with fangs are a terrifying idea
I thought the tombstones was a city at first.
Redo the tombstones, keep the ghosts the way they are.
I really like it as it is - great composition! The colours work beautifully. Wicked.
I love the ghosts :P I thought the tombstones was a city at first to...perhaps you could leave out the solid color blocks behind the tombstones? Besides that, I'm really taken with this :-) Great job!
this is so super good. $5 for sure.
looks a bit like penises, but i like it!
i don't know why but i really like it...