"Transit" or "one of these days..."

Design by polynothing

"Transit" or "one of these days..." by polynothing on Threadless
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cpdesign
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I like the illo and colors, just not contained in the box shape.

MooseDinner

I agree with cpdesign.

AsStarsGoOut

it's a nice picture, but it's not for a t shirt . . . .

mezo
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Typically, I'd agree with framing. And this might work well without one. BUT here it's not bothering me as it feels like a tourist snapshot and I think it works. You have really great linework and I'm enjoying the small details (I have a hoody that says ZERO, too!) but I have to ask....did you mean to make the lady look like Hilary Clinton?

herky
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great illustration and colors

amaliaslash

wow, you did so much depth, even with the color description. 5

pickledbib

the framing lends itself to this design... great detail & colour palate... nice work.

katolms

great illustration- hate the box

R G
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cool I like it like it is

Ellsswhere
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hmmm... its a GGGGreat illustration says tony the tiger!
but i dont think tshirts look nice with a box printed on them, reminds me of iron-ons and people that print off a family portrait for their family reunions and stick them on shirts... i think you are selling yourself short and could find some way to get rid of the box

Jennifuhrer

why are Hillary Clinton and Joe VW on the subway together?

_miche

keep the idea of framing the illustration, but instead of a box, have it be like you're looking through the subway window from the front of the car (like the windows you have in the very back)

polynothing
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Thanks miche. That's a really good idea!

staffell
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looks like the district line

.onion
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I like the illustration, but that box is just... egad. If you're going to use a box... maybe be a little more fancy about it? Like not just some rectangle, but you could make it look like a subway window, or ... I dunno, maybe not have a box at all.

In any case, the idea and execution is great!

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