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Thinking is a Chain Reaction
great concept and execution! my only suggestion is to work on the typography of "thinking is a chain reaction". why is there a period after thinking? why is the leading all squished together? why italics? i would lose the italics, lose the nonsensical period, maybe lose the phrase all together... i dunno, just some thoughts. nice work!
it might be a little big for my taste, but it's a neat idea.
To clarify: the "Thinking is a chain reaction" text IS NOT on the shirt. It's just a title on the presentation.
yes please keep the icky text off of the shirt.
looks good, my only thoughts are that maybe the red and blue dots in the head are just a little too big? or maybe the blue dots in the head should be slightly smaller than the red dots (in the "brain"). If the blue dots were slightly smaller (nothing drastic) they would sit back a little more and the white skull would pop out a little more. Maybe? I'd be curious to see how it looked anyway. Enough babble! I like it.
the head anad skull reminds me of:
for some reason, it is not letting me post hte link
Concept is great, I think it'll stand out more on a diff. color shirt though.
really cool, and i actully really like the polka dot head.
i'd put the key on the final print, without the Chain Reaction title, which i think you said you were leaving out. but that's just me.
also when you say the patterns are a better scale what does that mean? cause i was thinking smaller dots...