The Meticulous Examination of a Rather Delicious P

Design by J-Ray

The Meticulous Examination of a Rather Delicious P by J-Ray on Threadless
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FRICKINAWESOME
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Good idea, but viewed from afar the pie looks like pacman or a leftover pizza. I like the black and pink color combo best tho.

Willish

Mmm green pie.

helo

Delicious concept ! The thicker linework on the smaller
sized designs in your presentation is the thickness I like.
The close up of the design has frail, thin lines.

Big cream pies to the face of
anyone who says, "No text."

melh696
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heh, nice.

Edword
Edword profile pic Alumni

hand drawn look, nice switch up j-ray.

jenraskopf

Love it. Once actually brought a pie into economics class for a presentation. Very hard to get precise percentages. Your drawing looks far better than the presentation did. Hope it gets a better grade!

mlnewco

I like the linework & concept. The only area I have difficulty with is the slice portion. It is hard to distinguish the crust from the filling. Otherwise I like it.

Vindemiatrix

Agreed re: crust/filling. If you don't want to add another colour, maybe just do a darker shading for the filling?

Overall, though, it's cute and funny. :)

Vindemiatrix

You could try adding some horizontal lines in the place where the crust meets the filling to create a sharper contrast... (and you're right, I can see it when I squint too!)

PsyGuy

XD... its pi!!
concept and design are superb ;)

schleb

YOU WIN A FIVE AND A DOLLAR SIGN.

liwintin

haha~
i like it..it's simple and funny....$5

Jennifuhrer

yummers

if it's apple or rhubarb, it's $5

ISABOA
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the pie looks so content - 5$

mezo
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What is that? 65% of pie left? 70%?

corey8

great! i vote for blue.
5

lsmc88

this is nice. And i think that is 75% missing if you take into account the perspective

crunchygirl

Fine job, just should have been a better pie model. I like 'em FAT. And the text is absolutely necessary.

Flying Mouse
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Look really good on olive! Nice work!$5

jenraskopf

I thought this would score higher. Maybe I'm too much of a nerd but I wanted this shirt.

schleb

booo at the score.

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