The Little Green Snake Ate Too Much Cake...

Design by xLisax

The Little Green Snake Ate Too Much Cake... by xLisax on Threadless
1.63 Avg Score
0% Funded
239 Votes
Results Are In!
    • 1
    • 5
  • 1.63 Avg Score
  • 239 scores

13 Comments

xLisax
xLisax profile pic Artist

we all know the story of the little green snake who ate too much cake, and now he has a belly ache. i'm thinking most appropriate for a kids tee. :)

ANCU

if you had made a layout like a comics-book, the composition would seem more solid or equilibrate, otherwise very cute and kids-like... and not only :D Like it!

YaaH
YaaH profile pic Alumni

4

xLisax
xLisax profile pic Artist

ah yes, i see what you mean about they eyes and mouth! thankyou :)

celandinestern
celandinestern profile pic Alumni

cute idea :) though I think it might be more effective if it were only the snake with the cake already inside it, and it could be imagining the cake in a thought bubble or something. Or its belly could have a totally cake-shaped bump on it.

xLisax
xLisax profile pic Artist

celandinestern , that is indeed a very good idea! :) i was struggling to fit both of them on there, and still make it work! i am liking the idea of the thought bubble and will certainly give that a shot! thankyou!

xLisax
xLisax profile pic Artist

yes. i might try both and do a critique.... although i never seem to get much feedback in critiques apart from spammers trying to get you to score their designs. that cheeses me off!

No account?

Popular printed designs