Playground Joust

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jillustration
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I used to love playing on these things as a kid

hebe

Great idea, wonderful drawn. But I'd prefer a smaller emblem and a different color. And yes, maybe something on the shield!

thermy777

Wonderful idea! I agree that that the shield needs something, but otherwise I love it. Even though I usually hate pink, it does work well. I wouldn't mind seeing what it looks like on green. :)

antosh
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great! but I agree with what the others said.

trindli

Me and a friend still play on these and freak out everybody :D

I agree that the shield needs something.. maybe another play horse

Batty1980

Loving this, great design.
Agreeing that a different colour shirt would be better and that the shield could do with some detail.
$5 on another colour.

Flying Mouse
Flying Mouse profile pic Alumni

NICE! Will look good on black shirt :) $5

madruga

LOL! Very cool! Ans awesome design!

paaron46

Anything but pink, but it's a great shirt.

biticol
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LOL, fantastic use of colours and drawing. This WILL be printed. $5.

jillustration
jillustration profile pic Artist

thanks for the feedback and the compliments :). Ya it could go on something other than pink probably; but i wanted a light color, not plain white though, that would let the drawing stand out. But, you could put it on a lot of other stuff I just didn't play with it much. But that isn't too hard to change thank goodness. So if you like the drawing but wanna see it on a different color - no problem! feel free to suggest other colors.

Melikochan

Agree with new color and more detail on the shield. For a shirt color, maroon or black?

jillustration
jillustration profile pic Artist

https://netfiles.uiuc.edu/nickell/illustration/seafoamjoust.jpg

ok I'll stop after this but I played with the color one more time. it's on seafoam - a color not really on the template but I've seen shirts printed on it before. I feel like blue or grey would compete too much with the other greys in the pic, so i like this as an alternative.

slmstanley

Hate the pink background, but otherwise, this is $5.

BubuSam
BubuSam profile pic Alumni

Funny

mocha_craze

oh now this is clever. $5, fo sho

Frisbar

so clever! must be the u of i schooling :-)
$5

Andorra

I think jousting poles are thicker...
otherwise, this is awesome! I hope it gets printed :)

Number09

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, NOT PINK!
PLEEEAAASE!

I love the design.
$5

treeboo

great concept, would love to see it on several different colors

jillustration
jillustration profile pic Artist

i did several other versions w/ a fluer de lis and different background colors... please see links somwhere above :)

ilovetomasb

haha make it smaller

cecered

agree with Quelin and thatmaybeAWESOME

Gloomymoose

Hahaha this is AMAZING.

GlazedKoala

$5.
Definitely keep to lighter colors and I liked the original sword better. The problem with the thicker sword is that it needs more detail at that size then simply being big and black. If you fix that up, it'd be perfect. Oh, and it's better with the insignia on the shield.

alicakes

GENIUS! $5
I'D WEAR IT.

mattieett

love it - just make it smaller on the shirt

staffell
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no way

elemenopy

I really like this shirt concept.

13strong

I know this has already been said, but this design just doesn't make any sense if the knight is holding a fencing foil (sword). It could be a normal sword (though a proper jousting lance would be better), but a knight wouldn't ever use a foil - as far as I know that's not something that anyone would take onto a medieval battlefield (at least, not if you wanted to live).

The other version of the sword isn't great either - you've still got the same hand-shield thing, and the lance itself is just a thick black line.

Look up some lances on the net, redo it, and you've obviously got yourself a winner here.

Oh, and the pink is horrible for this.

jillustration
jillustration profile pic Artist

please, if you don't have anything constructive to say that hasn't already been said, DON"T COMMENT!!!!!!!!!! I KNOW there are problems with the design and all. i heard EVERYTHING you just said about 60 times and it just gets old ok????? sorry just venting.

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