My last cigarette

Design by sustici

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BigOrangeStar

I think it would be a lot better without the frame of the picture - incorporate it into the shirt a little more, maybe extend out the tiles so that they fade out... that'd be neat. :]

thepants

yeah, drop the whole picture frame and text...just let it be the smoldering cigarette in the urinal with the name of the shirt left as is. i love the drawing though, and think it could be great, but with changes.

Skilly

I'm usually the first person to say "LOSE THE FRAMES", but in he case of this being a polaroid, I think it works as part of the design. Having said that, a bit of drop shadow or curving up at the bottom could do wonders for the pic, lest it looks too flat. Any shirt with a urinal on, I'll have to vote at least a 4 though.

misakaji

i actually like the frame. im normally against boxed up designs but i think this design won't work as well without the polaroid frame :)

misakaji

but i dont think a lot of non smokers would buy the shirt though

peachsan

The design itself is nice, lines are clean, and ideas is good, but I personally don't like anything related to smoking. This is just my opinion, no offense.

bubblelab

love polaroid. nice work.

bubblelab

like it on red.

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