Great concept, but the way you've represented the water is dragging down the design. I think you could show above/below water with a color switch instead of having a line across everything and it would be more pleasing to the eye.
This is a great concept, but the execution lacks a lot of finesse. The air-water divide doesn't work, the boat is way too big for any fish to hook (something like a shark or swordfish snagging a small fishing boat would be a much tenser standoff), and the fish isn't very convincing. I'd do a total rework, maybe use the critique process, and resubmit.
I'd kind of prefer this concept being done with some fisherman on the boat staring at a mermaid on a line, like a worm lure for fish. That would be a more fun version of this concept, but the concept is solid. I agree with those who want a different representation of the water, it's a bit too cut and paste.
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