Dweller, Dweller, Body Seller

Design by bengineer

Dweller, Dweller, Body Seller by bengineer on Threadless
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bengineer
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This is my first submission. It's come a long way and many of you did a great job supporting me by critique.
It's 7 colors and a gradient on a cream tee.
Hope you like it :)

Bahis

only thing bugging med about this one is that the shadows are a bitt messed up. Love the idea though ;)

isawa

Ya, I commented in critiques about fixing the shadow, oh well...

bengineer
bengineer profile pic Artist

thx for your comments! @isawa and above posts:
i thought about fixing the shadows and even did in illustrator.
but pls consider that if this gets printed the shirt color will be a little different from the template's one. She shadow is supposed to have a slightly darker color than the shirt. This way it won't look as agressive and dominant as in the presentation. and if i'd made it smaller you'd hardly recognize it on the actual tee. that's why i exaggerated it this way.
hope you get what i mean :)

FRICKINAWESOME

Yup, fix those shadows and yo've got yourself a neat lil creepytime design here.

sausage_moe

yeah. it's up. great first sub! loads of love and a 5 from sausage-country!

bengineer
bengineer profile pic Artist

thx, hope you like it anyway :P

pindian

5$. rock on dude.

agrimony

my main grouse is not the shadows but the gradient. it seems pretty unnecessary to me,a halftone would have sufficed, cutting down the number of colors.

C Kid

I don't see a problem with the gradient because it is the same grey color used in the tear. No extra color there. Yes, the shadow on the Tee and the shadow on the creature's body have a slightly different angle. But that is an easy fix. This reminds me of the spaghetti scene in Alien. Creepy little creature. Really nice first submission! Keep them coming!

RedRobotMonkey

Well executed. I dont see the big deal about the shadows. I would change the shadow on the ripped part as it contradicts the other shadow, but that is barely noticeable. Overall it looks good, and i don't see anything wrong with it.

mark722

pretty nice design, i hope you weren't accusing me of copying it.

bengineer
bengineer profile pic Artist

no, i didn't, it's alright ;)

ndikol

cool ;D

voodazz

The added shadows made a big difference.

gary3ndd

Still looks good to me. It's not realistic so the shadow is ok to me.

bengineer
bengineer profile pic Artist

what's ".0125"?

Pakpandir

excellent design! creepy too yet simple and well executed. great job dood

ibyes

This is pretty cool, nice job!

bengineer
bengineer profile pic Artist

well, not too happy about the score but i think it's ok for a first submission :P thx everybody for scoring!

bengineer
bengineer profile pic Artist

haha, just saw this comment :P
for anyone who's interested, i didn't say his sub was bad, i just told him it had been done in a very polite way.
Btw: Here's a link to his first sub :D

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