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Design by staffell

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staffell
staffell profile pic Artist

I | Just
Love | Wordplay

mezo
mezo profile pic Alumni

So clever, but I am not sold on the look. The text could be way betterererer. 3

Quell

The hoodie is brilliant.

chelly

neat

tee_coupon

Very clever but weak execution.

ferfo

i believe i $5'd this

FRICKINAWESOME
FRICKINAWESOME profile pic Alumni

Nice idea, really great that it can be read up, down, left right, inside out, backwards, etc. Zip up is great. It's just not something I'd wanna wear. But i gotta give it upfor the innovation.

Miss Fortunate

Hehe, I like the zipping animation. Nice idea--like the two phrases thing coming out to be the same idea. Sadly, it's not my kind of thing.

Lightpost

Maybe an old English text for the "I do care" side and a gradient of some sort in the solid red half.

Lightpost

But I really love the wordplay.

Mountain Gnome

I do care for this design just not enough!

3 + 1 for presentation = 4

Lyri

I like the concept, but it could be executed SO much better. For instance, the typography and the fitting inside the heart could be improved. Maybe you could also add some color options?

kivvi

i concur

mgill52

Good idea, needs better style

theevidenceisme

I would definitely love it if it were executed better. Resubmit and yo have my vote.

blacklambi

That model looks so happy....Great idea honey!

PeculiarTiffany
PeculiarTiffany profile pic Alumni

It is kinda emo, though I love the concept. :) I see what you did there!

mlnewco

theevidenceisme
theevidenceisme on Jan 05 '09
I would definitely love it if it were executed better. Resubmit and you have my vote.


Ditto

staffell
staffell profile pic Artist

I'm not surprised on the wack score - I had to rush this to enter it in the JOT. Now I'm back I'll have a go at a different execution

soloyo
soloyo profile pic Alumni

This is great, you should give it another try!

staffell
staffell profile pic Artist

Thanks soloyo! Funnily enough, I've been brainstorming this idea for ages, but I can't successfully come up with two different phrases which fit together as one. Also, the theme has to be a little less depressing next time.

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