Dance Despite the Dangers Lurking

Design by WanderingBert

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WanderingBert
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A sub based on Little Red Riding Hood.

mezo
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The wolf & the trees are ASTOUNDING but I think you need to redo the body. She looks clunky and anatomically incorrect. 4

mezo
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(ps, the hatching on her looks like body hair)

WanderingBert
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It is anatomically correct- this is a jazz dance position that i've copied from a photo so I know that I got it right.
Thanks for the feedback Mezo :)

Maltzmania
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fucking awesome

reminds me of Fables Graphic Novel

slaterock
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yah, the wolf and trees are great, but as mezo said, the body needs some work.

walmazan
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I love the concept, but the body looks a little wair to me... 4

FRICKINAWESOME
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Out-there awesomeness.

I agree even if this copied from a photo, it still seems a bit too extreme. Sometimes truth is stranger than exaggeration! Still nice contrast here between the background wolf and the little red ballerina.

ruffsta

impending doom, I like the evil red eyes on the wolf. Good contrast. Cool

SoldierofGondor

As stated, the wolf looks really nice. Maybe change the shading style on the body?

mezo
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I suppose what really bugs me is the girl's clunky hobbit feet, and her shoulder/boob (?) area. It doesn't seem like she even has thighs, and her neck looks too long. Her face is also strange with that cheek line. She's not fluid and graceful like dancers tend to be. You need to soften your hatching and lines when drawing the female figure is all.

WanderingBert
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Thanks for the feedback everyone- I see where the issues are now- I may resub this in the future with a newly drawn girl. Perhaps in a better pose as well.

EmilyinFresno

Beautiful! If it came in a nice color (something besides earth tone) I would buy it.

Lil Ro

..great!

herky
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nice, I the wolf character is awesome!

ettauno

WOW!Beautiful!!

phyntosia

I think this is really nice, but my first thought when I saw this was... leg hair?

s0da

This is fantastic. I love it.

phones

$5

auxocrome

I totally would've $5ed this if I'd seen it when it was up. Please print, Threadless!

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