Bears night out

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ashedgreg
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Cartoon style bear showing the different stages of his night out.

YaaH

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rmc1579

I liked it. I'll like to see it on a gray color t-shirt!!

JimmyToTheBe

I LOve a cartoon, this makes me laugh

Shinobisan

really cool 5!

Nicholas.G

Really like this. The only thing I can think to do would be to add a fruit or umbrella to the cocktail to fancy it up a bit. Though that might exceed the color limit

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks for all these comments. I'm glad people like my design. I did try it with an umbrella and it didnt look right using the colours I already have and I didnt want to use anymore colours.

Thanks for all the nice comments, they are really apprciated.

ninaws

I like this! I think the last few instances could be tweaked a little to better convey the progression:

-Happy, pouring the shot (looks good, just giving it as a starting point for reference)

-Turning the shot over: I don't think his expression should be sad drunk yet. Maybe swap it with the wide-eyed, open mouth version instead. This point should be wild and crazy!

-Tongue out: There should be the turned over shot as well as a few more empty shot glasses gathered. At this point in the night, I think it would be time for sad drunk. You know, that .. I've-had-just-one-shot-more-than-I-should-have-and-I've-gone-from-fun-drunk-to-not-feeling-good-drunk drunk.

-Falling over: This is good! Just more shot glasses and the bottle should be there too, tipped over.

Hope that helped!

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Ninaws, thank you for the tips they are much appreciated. I'm glad that you like the design. It's a shame I did'nt see some of your ideas before I submitted my design. You had some really good ideas for it. Thanks.

Ulou86
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cute cartoon :D but u may wanna consider total colours used :) nice kick start..

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks, I'm glad you like the cartoon. Im pleased with how the bear turned out :) I hope I haven't exceeded the max amounts of colours.

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks :)

pd23

very nice

Naferiuz

Really good stuff its funny i like it

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks for the feedback guys :)

bandy
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hahaha..Cute!

Kris Baker

I like it. It's funny and the color choices were good.

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks for the nice comments. Much appreciated :)

dcschaub

This has come a long way since the first draft I saw a while back! I think I might like to see it on a different color shirt though as the bears kind of blend in with the current color. Great job though!

smitbones

ahah nice!

SilvaArts

Like the design nice job.

Farnell

haha nice work

static7r7

love it, 5 :]

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks for all the comments people, again they are really appreciated.

BeanePod

haha, cute and some good expressions in there :)

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks.

khavall

nice

gebe
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super cool =) nice work!

jadyn.chen

Super cute! I feel the sad expression in the middle row seems a little out of place; from personal experience I have never felt sad while drinking. :] Maybe find a different expression that better transitions between happy and sloppy?

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks for the comments, much appreciated. The sadness in the fourth picture is not due to the drink, it's because he has run out of drink and that's why he tips his glass over because he cant believe its empty and then in the 5th picture we see him after he has finally had himself a few more drinks :)

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks for the comments, much appreciated. The sadness in the fourth picture is not due to the drink, it's because he has run out of drink and that's why he tips his glass over because he cant believe its empty and then in the 5th picture we see him after he has finally had himself a few more drinks :)

JonBurgessDesign

Nice idea. maybe the sequence is harder to follow with the 4th one needing a bit of explanation. Fun though.

OneWeirdDude
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Hope this gets printed so I can get it for a friend...!

Kat Almo

I like this, it very fun. the progression is good, very easy to follow. I would only suggest switching the 4th and 5th progression... possibly... but that may just be because my roommates gets psycho then depressed when they drink....

WildHeart12

Ha Ha, its funny and cute :) I'd try a different coloured t-shirt to make the characters stand out more - maybe a type of blue or stick to white?

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks for all the nice comments :)

moosabman

Haha, had already scored this, off the cute charts.

GuyHermelin

Very cute! I can see kids wearing this.

sayahelmi

cute and awesome, hi5

mirisch

So cute!

PicklePicker

aw! cute and funny! http://www.threadless.com/submission/451602/What_a_Pickle/showmore,designs

Roxanap

it`s really cute! :)

ashedgreg
ashedgreg profile pic Artist

Thanks everyone, I'm glad you like it :D

Golden Method

Thx for the critique ashedgreg. P.s. your desing is a 5.

Beebery

Cute bear! One suggestion is maybe have three different bears in a row (i.e. this guy with his buddies), rather than a sequence, although it's great as is!

Ian-S

Nice work!

ghury13

cute!

timekiller2012

Funny :)

P.S. Thanks for the comment on my design.

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