Breakdance

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Jebs
Jebs profile pic Artist

squintygirl> yes they are :-) (cyclops) thanks for your comments. I tried to make a view with the desk in background a bit far (it's assumed that my view is very close to the crayons, pencils), i hope it is not "that" off...

Jebs
Jebs profile pic Artist

here we go! the other colors are available on the blog ;-)

.onion
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good word :) i like the illustration. concept is weird, but that's okay!

.onion
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*work.

Verdana

Ah ha! It is a desk in the background! I, too, thought it was a city, and I had to check again when you said it was not.

Awesome job. This is pretty darn cool.

Jebs
Jebs profile pic Artist

thanks everybody: so, to explain exactly what was my point: As the BreakDance is at the beginning a street dance, a street style, i tried to make the desk look like buildings and "city like"...you know what? i'm really happy because it works!

filak
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Awesome $5

jayman22

should be threadless loves threadless

Jebs
Jebs profile pic Artist

sphagnum> the idea of the "desklamp" was my original idea, to throw them under the spotlight...dunno why i didn't do it then (lazy? lol). For the positions, i am not sure it will change the concept if i create other moves. sarajaynan> if you break yours, i won't pay the bills for the loss :-p thanks everybody!

canceromega

I really enjoy this design!

ntopp

Oh, this is definitely funky, and I dig the style it's drawn in. However, I think it'd be more rad if you defined the space a bit more to make it more apparent that it's a desk. And I don't really feel the little orange bits around their feet and hands. I don't know how hard you'd like to play up the play on words, but maybe if you had a piece of paper there to be like a sheet of cardboard to dance on... That might be rad, but unnecessary.

As it stands, I think this is an excellent concept and could see it selling pretty well, but I think there are a few things that need to change before this is fully realized.

ntopp

*...That might be rad, but it might not be necessary. (It didn't seem clear the way I wrote it.)

Jebs
Jebs profile pic Artist

thanks again! //// ntopp> i love when somebody take all that time to improve the works of others :-D the idea of a sheet of paper was one of my firsts thoughts when i did it, but it didn't work...for some reason, but i could try again of course, it COULD be better ;-) about the play on words, yes, i want to dig the concept, but not sure with the direction i would take...thanks again, i'll think about that ;-)

Jebs
Jebs profile pic Artist

kate kadoo> in fact, it's meant to be like skyscrapers, but i note your thought, i'll try it to improve ^^ thanks !

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