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"rex's ambitions of becoming a superhero were quickly bypassed when he realized people are delicious". tee hee
screw text haters
the text is what makes this super great
kind of awesome
I think the text could get moved a bit, but I love this.
I think you should pick a tense. Probably present tense in this circumstance.
I think you should have taken this to the critiques first. Looks good but could use some work.
it's a comic book font to go with the whole superhero idea...
I wouldn't say "were quickly bypassed" I'd say somethimg more like "were quickly forgotten"
But otherwise I like this. It reminds me of Calvin and Hobbes.
Freshview would be correct. "People are delicious" is stating a fact, which doesn't cease to be. The tenses in the statement are fine.
it'd be awesome if the text was like a comic book
...the text needs to be more expressive
but it is a comic book font, i believe that might even be the name of the font
you should have put the text in one of those little boxes like in a comic book, like where they put narration or notes from the editor.
pretty please print this. O_O
ditch the text
The entire sentence is awkwardly worded, which is what is throwing people off. Something along the lines of "Rex's ambition to become a superhero was quickly abandoned when he realised that people are delicious" would flow better and put the attention on the humor and the drawing, rather than causing the reader/viewer to spend 10 minutes trying to figure out just what it is about the sentence that bothers them.
Who cares if the sentence is a bit awkward, not all comic strip lines are grammatically amazing either, but IT WORKS. Really funny...without the text, this wouldn't be half the shirt it is. I'd like the text underneath the dino and larger, or putting this in a comic-strip type environment or box to give it more of that ripped from the comix feel. Like this a lot tho.
The illustration is awesome. I think it works with or without the text but if we're going to turn into grammar-nazis about it, it should read, "Rex's ambitions of becoming a superhero are quickly bypassed when he realises people are delicious".
This is great
ok since i got so many people saying they wanted different grammar/font/in a comic strip box i have added a coupla options here on flickr:
some different placements. i did the font myself, handwritten. I also changed the sentence to read: "Rex's ambitions of becoming a superhero are quickly forgotten when he realizes people are delicious". I do hope this makes people happier with it :) I may just resub.
i can also change it to say "rex's ambition of becoming a superhero is forgotten, i just reread some of the above statements. :)
change "quickly bypassed" to "dashed" and you've got a $5
I think you did a great job, and things should be left as is!
i like it alot
i think i will... i just need to figure out how to do the text in a way that will make most ppls happy
It's a tough crowd. You could always try another site (or cafepress.com =)