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darn....I'm working on a dogfight shirt as well....I like yours, but I still plan to submit mine:)
center placement kills this. Look at the flying formations fighter planes use and use a similar configuration for your dog planes (I'd recommend adding at least one more plane).
Love the concept, but so much more could be done to this to really liven up the concept...like perhaps...having an actual dogfight in the air on the tee? Nice idea tho.
I get the dogfight theme, but my first thought was "bomber"...as in the dogs that leave bombs on my front lawn. I expect little bombs on my back lawn (I've got two little dogs), but running over unexpected big ones with the lawnmower in the front...ugh. And I never see the dogs leaving them, so I can only assume they're flying in undetected to strafe the neighborhood.
fatboyjim, I think the improvements you made are perfect. I'm upping the score I gave this :)
concerning the improvements...it's better, but the dog in the foreground still looks disinterested. the bullet holes tie the brown to the red, but there's nothing tying the red to the brown....does that make sense?
Perhaps you could redraw his head to look in the red plane's direction? He did just get shot...also, changing the dog's color slightly to something less similar to the plane might make it stand out more.