Othello

Design by mindtrance

Othello by mindtrance on Threadless
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EyelinerRocks

i love this! Othello is an amazing play!

gene-o

I like it. All of it. Heart included. A 5.

Wetbo

dude, it's Othello, it's not emo, just because TBS and other bands took the phrase and used it for their music doesn't make it emo, this is classical literature

greeneyedem

ooooo, i love this one

alexan

HOLY, THIS IS AN ASWOME DESIGHN!!!!

love it all,

555$$$

alexan

HELL YES IT IS LITERATURE,

and by the way TBS SUCKS MONKEY __,

and what the hell is up with ppl and not likeing EMO!!!

alexan

i hope this shirt wins, i want it NOW!!!

stubbythumbs

not a fan of center aligned text or the paintbrush tool.

that said, if you boost the quantity of gray (used in the background text) this would be pretty good

lostatsea

oh my freakin' god.

Rainbowbrite

oh wow thats great. 5$

mindtrance
mindtrance profile pic Artist

I didn't know this was up for scoring! I was going to change a few things and resub it. I still might.

The mistake I made was not making all the I's capital.. but I was thinking of taking the main section of text that you can read and writing it out in cursive and then resubbing it. What do you think?

mindtrance
mindtrance profile pic Artist

that reminds me... the other mistake I made in the sub was the text in the first comment you read... it's meant to be a different section of text posted as the first comment on here. Threadless didn't get to it in time to take it out of the running.

I really want to change the text to cursive so it looks more like a handwritten letter, the font in the back would be as it is.

The text it was taken from and exactly what's on the shirt is this:

" Do themselves homage: these fellows have some soul;
And such a one do I profess myself. For, sir,
It is as sure as you are Roderigo,
Were I the Moor, I would not be Iago:
In following him, I follow but myself;
Heaven is my judge, not I for love and duty,
But seeming so, for my peculiar end:
For when my outward action doth demonstrate
The native act and figure of my heart
In compliment extern, 'tis not long after
But I will wear my heart upon my sleeve
For daws to peck at: I am not what I am."

lemonalle

Coool... I'm a sucker for Shakespeare!

mindtrance
mindtrance profile pic Artist

that's a good idea too Canuck.

NessaChan

Good job. I think I would like the heart better if it were further up on the sleeve, but it really doesn't matter, I like it anyway. =)

mindtrance
mindtrance profile pic Artist

I did a few other options...

DeChance

Please print this.... I so want this in a long sleeve shirt..... $5

littlem

this is nice!

littlem

and i'd love the heart in the "shoulder tattoo" placement:)

mindtrance
mindtrance profile pic Artist

I can't say I've ever had a littlem comment before on a design, sweet!

seriously - thank you for the feedback! If this gets printed I'm going to do the suggestions you've mentioned. I like the heart on the detailed version in my blog a lot better too.

Any preference on the font vs. cursive?

FreezingintheSno

I HATE IAGO . so much more than anything in the world. but i would buy this just to show my english teacher. lol :)

JanVic

if the sleeve was shorter and the heart higher up i'd get it! :D it's great though :) 5$

Roostersauce

im really not a shakespeare fan...

taik

too emo, 'n' the heart eludes to the Smashing Pumpkins...Billy Corgan isn't emo. He doesn't even have hair.

taik

Oh, and the text may not be emo, but the style in which it is presented is emo.

mindtrance
mindtrance profile pic Artist

thank you all for the nice comments and the score :)

bananaphone
bananaphone profile pic Alumni

nice work cashing in on the shakespear vote.

shirtflirt

kids even know who shakespear is anymore?

mindtrance
mindtrance profile pic Artist

shakespear? Is that ipear's brother?

luna.de.miel

so usually i read through everyone else's replies, then add my two cents...couldn't wait this time,...this is phenominal! i love it,absolutely 5$ and i don't even buy stuff online normally.

one suggestion though - that line always made me think a little higher up on the sleeve, like it might have slipped down from the shoulder, a place where the whole world can see it... like on the side of the upper arm rather than down by the cuff.

luna.de.miel

i also just noticed that scoring was completed ages ago...anyone know what happened to it?

mindtrance
mindtrance profile pic Artist

it was never picked as a print sadly :(

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