"Transit" or "one of these days..."
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2022 days ago
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Nov 14 '06
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2.34 from 2,095 votes
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cpdesign on Nov 14 '06 I like the illo and colors, just not contained in the box shape.
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I agree with cpdesign.
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As cpdesign. It's a great illustration, you just need to find a way to make it blend in without restricting it to a frame.
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it's a nice picture, but it's not for a t shirt . . . .
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I agree with cpdesign :) otherwise, nice design
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mezo on Nov 14 '06 Typically, I'd agree with framing. And this might work well without one. BUT here it's not bothering me as it feels like a tourist snapshot and I think it works. You have really great linework and I'm enjoying the small details (I have a hoody that says ZERO, too!) but I have to ask....did you mean to make the lady look like Hilary Clinton?
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DeadPoetic_Underoath on Nov 14 '06 fantastic 5$
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omgomgomg!!!!!!! i was just about to say, the girl looks like hilary clinton, and then i saw mezo's comment!
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herky on Nov 14 '06 great illustration and colors
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i love public transportation!! bout time someone made a metro shirt....however, i wish there were more color options. it looks great on orange, but i bet it would look nice on burgundy, or even brown tones. 5 either way
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wow, you did so much depth, even with the color description. 5
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$5
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really nice design, great detail. The box bothers me though, T-shirts in a box look like those shirts you get printed at some kiosk in the mall.
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the framing lends itself to this design... great detail & colour palate... nice work.
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great illustration- hate the box
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I like the box. The design is fab fab
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R G on Nov 14 '06 cool I like it like it is
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Ellsswhere on Nov 14 '06 hmmm... its a GGGGreat illustration says tony the tiger!
but i dont think tshirts look nice with a box printed on them, reminds me of iron-ons and people that print off a family portrait for their family reunions and stick them on shirts... i think you are selling yourself short and could find some way to get rid of the box |
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great, but remove the marquee, blend the design with the tee
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why are Hillary Clinton and Joe VW on the subway together?
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agree on the box shape
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Awesome design, really, but the box kills it.
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I love it...but the box does kinda kill it....
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I like this. Too bad I hate orange. :D otherwise pretty good...not such a fan of the box either.
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I don't have a problem with the window: it creates a juxtaposition between an illustation and a photo. I love the monochromatic pallete. Killer! $5
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keep the idea of framing the illustration, but instead of a box, have it be like you're looking through the subway window from the front of the car (like the windows you have in the very back)
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polynothing on Nov 15 '06 Thanks miche. That's a really good idea!
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I like it, i dated a guy once that looked like that
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I like the colour of the design. I'm not sure about the colour of the shirt... I'm not sure I would wear an orange shirt.
But I love this design. You've captured your concept brilliantly. Everything about this reminds me of my daily commute on my local train. I even look like the guy in the design. The colour of the design is just perfect... is it me, or are all trains that colour? The framing is a good idea - I mean, a train carriage is just a long box isn't it. But I like the idea of look through a window instead of just a rectangle frame. |
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staffell on Nov 15 '06 looks like the district line
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pretty.
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is that the L in chicago?
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that looks like the dude who can chage the time and stuff on that show heroes
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AAAAah , that box.. hurting.. my.. eyes..
Wicked illustration though |
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I don't like the box frame.
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nice draw, it dont think it fits on shirt dough.
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without box n its a 5
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don't like the box.
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alot of detail, should resub without the box
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EXTREME AWESOME 5$!
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yoshi andrian on Nov 18 '06 agree with miche ^
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Looks like 'one of those days' instead of 'one of these days'!
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i love this. and i love the box. i think it looks cool.
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I like the illustration, but that box is just... egad. If you're going to use a box... maybe be a little more fancy about it? Like not just some rectangle, but you could make it look like a subway window, or ... I dunno, maybe not have a box at all.
In any case, the idea and execution is great! |
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..it needs to blend in more somehow..otherwise i love it.
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great design, awesome colors, but not so much loving the box.
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