Erm, no offense meant, but it's just a bit bland. I suppose it's mildly humorous, but not enough to warrant a shirt--and, design wise, it clashes. The starkness of the lines, the awkward placement, and the fact that the grey pole blends into the shirt color while the yellow jumps out make it all a bit "eh."
Aus(Trian)Sex--- You are a genious, my friend. Theres one Godamn rule for colors. 5 COLOR LIMIT. Pathetic toilet licker...
FuckFuzzAll--- I totally get the shirt. It's a good idea. GOD! bungling bible-thumper.
MamDingalingHackingPotWoot__TheHumper. Um, excuse my manners but what the Fuh...K? Are did you turn into a CAB (ClassyAssBitch) all of the sudden? OK Mr. Godforsaken Moron, gimme some more critique on how big your fucking arsenal asshole is!
maybe if the walking man were breakdancing or something... And I believe the majority of traffic lights have 3 (three) of the aforementioned lights. Mr/Mrs worldsapart needs to take the prescribed dosage of the right medicine
i have never seen a "world's apart" entry for a blog or submission that contained a complete sentence and/or navigable thought process in it for three months now. My suggestion is to bypass his entry quite hastily every time. As for this entry, yes, it's a walk sign ie. three hundred times less thrilling than the Labor Day shirt which isn't too exciting to begin with. My suggestion: ditch the walk sign, turn the long rod over and pretend this object is a lego toothbrush. That would be something i could get behind.
thanks to you who have left coherent comments. i'm working on giving it some "umph", so hopefully you'll see a better version up soon (that doesn't surpass the color limt)
SirDingleMackintoshFoot_theYounger
Erm, no offense meant, but it's just a bit bland. I suppose it's mildly humorous, but not enough to warrant a shirt--and, design wise, it clashes. The starkness of the lines, the awkward placement, and the fact that the grey pole blends into the shirt color while the yellow jumps out make it all a bit "eh."
Nice thought, though.
Fwuzzle
Is it humorous? I'm sorry, I just don't think it'd be a good shirt.
Auspex
i can't remeber where those rules are about colors
AWorldApart
Aus(Trian)Sex--- You are a genious, my friend. Theres one Godamn rule for colors. 5 COLOR LIMIT. Pathetic toilet licker...
FuckFuzzAll--- I totally get the shirt. It's a good idea. GOD! bungling bible-thumper.
MamDingalingHackingPotWoot__TheHumper. Um, excuse my manners but what the Fuh...K? Are did you turn into a CAB (ClassyAssBitch) all of the sudden? OK Mr. Godforsaken Moron, gimme some more critique on how big your fucking arsenal asshole is!
Got to love my insults, eh?
oregonian_jedi
No, I really don't have to love your insults.
Sputnik13
maybe if the walking man were breakdancing or something... And I believe the majority of traffic lights have 3 (three) of the aforementioned lights. Mr/Mrs worldsapart needs to take the prescribed dosage of the right medicine
Speak_Easy
I jaywalk & proud of it!
j.ayde
im pretty sure a world apart should take it easy. i mean. this is an art website. jeez.
Softbaked007
nice. but you gotta make it more interesting throw some humor into it, perhaps a pigeon or deer, anything to spice it up
little_mystique
Thought it was 4 colour limit?
FRICKINAWESOME
i have never seen a "world's apart" entry for a blog or submission that contained a complete sentence and/or navigable thought process in it for three months now. My suggestion is to bypass his entry quite hastily every time. As for this entry, yes, it's a walk sign ie. three hundred times less thrilling than the Labor Day shirt which isn't too exciting to begin with. My suggestion: ditch the walk sign, turn the long rod over and pretend this object is a lego toothbrush. That would be something i could get behind.
cubby cakes
make the man breakdance or something
amaliaslash
those were some stringing diatribes from AWorldApart. too bad it's a 4 color limit, and not 5.
schleb
thanks to you who have left coherent comments. i'm working on giving it some "umph", so hopefully you'll see a better version up soon (that doesn't surpass the color limt)
morganian
colour limit just got raised to 5 so that might make it easier, the little man reminds my of aTV program called the Old Grey Whistle Test.
Caasiopia68
no offense but its kind of boring. you could like have a car driving through there or something i dont know
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