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What would you suggest is changed or added, that is why I said "help me out" Thanks BradLand2 for being constructive
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yeah, constructive criticism, not just senseless bashing of designs.
but yeah, agreed with brad, there should be more action on the shirt, if you can add scenery or something, that would be cool. |
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my idea would be to have it look more sketched then silouteted or even a combination fo the two? i like the concept and the picture, but the output just came out lacking :] good effort though
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I like the shirt, but i would add more depth to the mans clothing. add a darker color to the indentions, or so i think.
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actually i like the design as is o.o placement and colors are nice, its simple and calming, but I guess it could use something more to give it some more meaning.
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That was the idea I was thinking of the bottle and was not sure if I could pull it off well, but we will give it a try!
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REMEMBER, BE NICE! gees,what makes you designers differnet from gerks? keep rocking man, ull get it right
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i like this! i don't understand why some people are being such douches here.
i like the bottle of ink idea, too :) |
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interesting image. I think the black of the face/arms throws it a little out of balance, because it's so heavy in relation to the spatter, and light lines of the clothing. Maybe a more neutral shade?
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great start, i like the fragmented style... maybe give the body more action - arms out, mouth more open... how would you look if you were tossed upwards? keep tinkering... it'll turn out great.
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Id totally buy a shirt with a picture of you walking in it...
I say you put a picture of someone else on the other side....maybe even a girl.....Heather? just sayin... |
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