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 Japanese Text says 'PLAY WAR!' I hope - can never be 100% sure with these online translation programs... anyway - hope you like!
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Funny. 4
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hmm... spiffy! but the dice seems too off-balanced
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I think taking the dice off would make it better....4
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the war is the dice..lol but like it (the dice)
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Lose the dice. Brilliant otherwise.
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Uhh, the whole point of the Dice is because its PLAYING, like a GAME. Keep the dice, BUT I think its off a little bit BECAUSE of the dice position. {4}
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The kanji translate as 'engeki sensou' which literally means "play war" but 'engeki' is not play as in a game, it is a play as in a performance onstage. So the meaning is not quite what you were looking for...
I would suggest a redesign and if you want it in Japanese, I would suggest the following: 戦争遊ぼう! (sensou asobou!) "Let's play war!" |
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againt the war..
but i like the tank :D |
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Cool - thanks for the translation advice! :-)
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I'm wondering if 'Play as a performance on stage' - still works as a concept - as it now has 2 meanings.. a theatre of war and a play as in a game with the dice visual... perfect rationale! ;-D
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I personally like the dice it gives the design another dimension and I think it sits well on the shirt - I don't have a problem that it's off centre - that's part of the attraction for me... :-)
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Looks best on the Red, if you redesign have more contrast with light-hearted play-games type images (the die and goody japany lettering is a good start) and realistic terrifying pics like the tanks
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okey dokey! ;-P
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$5, but huge and on black.
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might lose some of the detail - but I'll take a look! :-P
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maybe if you had two dice instead of a single die. Also, put one on top of the picture so that it looks like you've rolled them onto a game board.
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mmmm... there's a thought! ;-P
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Love the dice, keep them $5
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keep the dice, its good
and just a sudden thought but make the sun ray or what have you into cards thumbs up! |
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I would say two dice is better than one, and little smaller. Also, I'd remove the birds.
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Hmm...I agree, the die is a little awkward. Hah, that's ironic...let's play war--with an awkward die...there's got to be something there...ok, maybe not. Maybe you could have it rolling in, with or without another die, as if out of a cup or hand or something. But no, I like the sun rays as they are. Keep the Japanese motif steady. [4]
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I like the "theater of war" sense, which would allow you to lose the die, which just clutters up the image.
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I likes. -Mattias
www.BandoftheDay.com |
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you have the whole japanese sunrise thing going...
thats japan not damn north korea.... lol nice try really 0 |
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I've leave that interpretation to the wearer...!
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sorry, the computer I'm using right now doesn't let me write in Japanese, but if you know a little bit you'll get the idea - and to add to someone else's comment:
"Sensou wo asobimashou!" would be "Let's Play War!" or somesuch. "Sensou wo asobou" is more like "PLay War!" in a general way, kind of emphatic. Try "Sensou wo asobo yo!" it would be even more emphatic with that "yo" on the end. |
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cool - thanks for that! :-)
I've found another source (a japanese colleague) that's going to help out too!... |
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better when you didn't push the live trace button ;)
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or black white, You should have traced the tanks yourself
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ha... I prefer live trace - but I did do a fair amount of work over the top...
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I like it with the dice. It'd be kind of seen-it otherwise (in spite of the cool design). I'd buy.
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i'd buy it without the dice. But Im not sure of it being on there. Its distracting and I cant figure out immediately. Ah well, pretty good.
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