this is my sub for the boys like girls competition. the theme of hero/heroine to me really clicked in a comic theme, as in comic books growing up it seems to be the place where heroism is most clearly talked about. this design allows the viewer to reconstruct the story as they see it, a choose your own hero/heroine. if anything else, it'd be a good conversation starter ;)

Like the design, much prefer it on black though, makes the blue more vivid

i wish it wasnt out lined like that, kinda makes it look like a flash cartoon.

Good idea to make a story, and really hard to make it work.

i love the outline -makes it pop more. cool idea. i wish there were more recognizable scenes in the panels however.