I dont like this design for a lot of reasons. There is way too much text. The point of the shirt isn't as clever as I think it was in your mind. And it's all just too obvious. You dont give any credit to your audience and spell out every little thing (ex. YOU! on the CD)
i like the shirt but theres a couple of things wrong. you have enough text, either get rid of the text at the bottom or make it really small. the only text you should edit is the stuff below the cd, choose one out of the three (i like the term of nearly 80 years) and then shrink all of it a little
yeah i agree with most everyone here, i do like the idea of the human cd...but no allah sorry. religion ruined it for me. too much text, too big. keep it simple...less text, no religious aspect, unless you really really want to trademark it. but then i wouldnt want it.
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Backyardian
dang she must really like your design you didn't get called any names or cursed at I bet the book gave you a 4 or a 5
JohnWilliams713
I dont like this design for a lot of reasons. There is way too much text. The point of the shirt isn't as clever as I think it was in your mind. And it's all just too obvious. You dont give any credit to your audience and spell out every little thing (ex. YOU! on the CD)
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paste it on the streets as a poster
drumlineprospect
i like the shirt but theres a couple of things wrong. you have enough text, either get rid of the text at the bottom or make it really small. the only text you should edit is the stuff below the cd, choose one out of the three (i like the term of nearly 80 years) and then shrink all of it a little
Billy Badazz
It's political, religious, and geeky all in one!
simster
Im really feeling this whole idea, I think the text could have been handled better but I dig it
retrobohemian
Why with the religion . . . yuck. I was almost ready to give this a good score.
ms_conception
too much type. i got lost at.. uh see! i already forgot, nice graphics though
nervo
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benji
I'd like it more if the text was much smaller, but the actual design is nice.
graeamos
yeah i agree with most everyone here, i do like the idea of the human cd...but no allah sorry. religion ruined it for me. too much text, too big. keep it simple...less text, no religious aspect, unless you really really want to trademark it. but then i wouldnt want it.
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