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 Though it frustrated me, I'm still deep into it. Hey, be STRONG, darling. This is what we call LOVE.
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I hate to say it, but I'm sure you saw it coming: Lose the text. The design is gorgeous. I'd like to see it at the bottom of the shirt.
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prefer without text
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i really like the look of it in this placement with the text.
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the design is beautiful.
either move the text or take it off. also change the placement a tad. $5 though |
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I like the text!
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the design is beautiful. however, because of where the extension emerges from the body, it looks a bit like she just has a really long, funky penis.
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its wierd how the clothes go off like that. but i love this. its the perfect ba nd shirt.
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i love it!
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lose the text
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THXXXXXXXX for all your comments!
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Of course, with or without the text!
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I think that you could make the text more handwritten. Don't necessarily lose it altogether.
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i like it!
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I love your design always!~~
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yoshi andrian on Oct 24 '06 5 and i love the text.. keep as it is
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I'd say either put the text in another language, or move the text to the bottom of the shirt out of the way, or get rid of it.. $
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The text is sorta lame.
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oh...
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yah, the text would be cooler in french or something.
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Love it.. $5
Zoom for the front and back image please? *_* |
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It would be great with the design at the bottom of the shirt and the text on one of the sleeves. 4
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lose the text. I like the chick with the swirly penis...
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Yeahhhh you might want to reconsider the placement of your design extension. It does look like everythings originating from the crotch. I do love the entire design and concept otherwise.
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Lose the text--not only for design reasons, but because the words themselves are just sorta meh and detract from the art. When you can say it better with pictures, anyway, stick with that!
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Yeash it looks kind of cheesy with the text...
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i like the text but maybe different words
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very beautifull, great design but I'd prefer it without text.
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Well, I've try to put up a pic 'Without-Text' and 'Different Placement' here but failed. Seems can't show in comment box! Or am I using a wrong html code? I'm really not good at it!
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Anyway there's a pic showing another placement option in here: http://us.f2.yahoofs.com/hkblog/siEVJqCFERm1DLgqyl.8/blog/20061026020457494.jpg?ibwQ7PFB9MfO5Bce
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so nice
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I'd like it without the text
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i like it the way it is. maybe just the placement
but that's it. :D fantastic job. love the colors. |
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awseome- maybe design on front- writing in a bigger font on bak? just a suggestion
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Someone up there said to maybe change the language of the text. I like the text, but maybe a different font and language to compliment the curvature of the lines.
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ooh man. this is a cool design.
maybe get rid of some of the text, and have a shorter bit of text in curvier letters, or have more text and have it all running into itself and unreadable. tiny print on tshirt = unwanted stares and close examination. |
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cool design and cool placement!!
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THANK YOU!!!
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i love the design and the colors. yeah like a lot of people say, maybe the swirl should originate from her hair or arm or something
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Placement bottom corner! Lose text! But it is one lovely design! Move it down, and I'm sure it could get printed!
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I really like it, and the text does take something away, but I think instead of getting rid of it all together, you should keep just a line or two of it.
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So, how 'bout this placement?http://www.threadless.com/profile/373757/Una/blog/81762/How_to_put_up_a_photo_in_my_comment_box_blog
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Bravo! well done.
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I really like this! well done
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the extension thing does look odd. Maybe it is came up from the hem..? Excellent overall, tho. I like the text, but maybe less of a block shape to it.
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10!!
Adorei! |
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less text, different color.
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Let the text say whatever y0u want it to say. It has a very dreamy, poetic sound to it, just like the image. So they fit.
In my opinion, I think I would prefer the text nestled inside the image, but maybe you tried that and thought better of it. I say tweak it and resub with confidence, you've got a great design and a great idea so far. |
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I agree with the 'less text' vote and think the typed letters make a nice contrast with the design. maybe fit them all on one line that goes across instead of a box...maybe not. what about if the box were in the box made by the graphic (i.e., above the lady)? I think it's awkward but has a LOT of potential.
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Yes yes. The red. Make the red thing happen. I'm confused about how it works or why I can't get to it but red text on top of the image looks fantastic!
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you've heard enough about the text. perhaps placement on the lower hem, with the swirled design being either larger or longer, extending up the shirt.
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oh yes, and maybe taper off the end of the garment into a point where the black line starts, which might may the transition a little less jarring and less block-like
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prettyyyy!! ... cept she looks like she's pregnent with several cardboard boxes. or square babies... hmm..
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Is that a giant penis? or Am I completely sick?
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loose the text
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i like the text, makes it seem more unique and people would want to look at it more to see what it says. but yeah have the extension coming out of her hand because where it is looks freaky. but love the idea very touching
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Nice. Really good work. The text thing is fine for me too.
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the design is impressive.
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Love the placement of the text, but not the text itself... why did you choose that text anyway, I'm wondering?
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