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Dream

Submitted by:

DressedMyself
on Oct 10 '06

Average score:

1.79 out of 5

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2,154 people

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577 days ago

Comments:

35 comments

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DressedMyself on Oct 10 '06

First submission here to threadless, so even if you hate it, I'd love to hear your comments.

I'm having a little trouble deciding which color palette and layout I like better---please, impart on me your wisdom.

~Jess

k-lass on Oct 10 '06

i love the design...just maybe without the text? just a thought

keep up the good work!

BlueManBass on Oct 10 '06

science of sleep right?, such an amazing film

MrGallagher on Oct 10 '06

I really enjoy this submission, however, something about the text turns me off. I prefer it in the up and down layout in the front top right, or front bottom left. Keep up the great work!

xPunkxPsychox on Oct 10 '06

I also don't like the text...i also like the blue better and the top left or maybe even a bottom would be cool

DressedMyself on Oct 10 '06

Thanks for the comments, guys--From what I'm hearing, maybe text isn't the way to go--as for placement, I'm getting way more positive reactions to up and down layout.

lordikon on Oct 10 '06

I like the blue, but with the up and down layout. I look terrible in yellow.

semiatin on Oct 10 '06

Amazing! You rock my socks and my dreams!

ysy101 on Oct 10 '06

i like your drawing

HerLeastFavoriteColor on Oct 10 '06

That's so good! I wish I could draw like you. I agree with the person who said they would like it better without the text, or maybe do something else with the text more subtle. But the drawing is SUPER good and I'm envious! I like the purple color better, btw. -Mandee

DressedMyself on Oct 10 '06

thank you! I think I'm gonna just drop the text completely from the design.

JanePhan on Oct 10 '06

so pretty much it's bomb dot com and i like the text OKAY!?

haha

cutecarolyn on Oct 10 '06

I want to rock this shirt!!! i voted for you jess!!

christianna on Oct 10 '06

the woman face and man face ae the same? maybe make her profile less masculine? good though!

agallikeme on Oct 10 '06

amazing illustration for an amazing movie...

Starline on Oct 10 '06

The movie was awesome and so is this shirt.

AttackFromMARZ on Oct 11 '06

hey Jessica, it's semar...your design is awesome, it reminds me of your monotype final piece. i would have to agree with some of the others, i'm not a big fan of the text...maybe if it was a little more subtle and a favor the vertical layout on the shirt. take it easy.

alphabetapi on Oct 11 '06

awesome charicatures! good work, 3

k.c.11 on Oct 11 '06

Jessica! Wow, I really love it. And it DOES remind me of your monotype! I can't decide between vertical or horizontal...but I prefer the blue. I love how you made sure to get Stephan's pouty lip in your drawing...How adorable!! :-)

unkiesmunkle on Oct 11 '06

Awesome design, and a great drawing. I'd definately buy it!!

StinkyHairyItalian on Oct 11 '06

Amazing design and really well done. Blue looks good too. Hope it's printed!

Kats_Meow on Oct 11 '06

Hey Jessica! I like the blue one but I agree on the text not being there, I think it would look better without it. The horizontal one I like more to. Good luck to you, I hope it gets printed.

kirbear on Oct 11 '06

Would love it on blue, up and down layout, sans the text. $4

ax_man on Oct 11 '06

i like the idea...just something about the overall design doesnt work. real close tho

Galwaygrrl on Oct 11 '06

vertical layout on blue....i like the text. and also the guy's nose.

yeohgh on Oct 11 '06

love your illustration, SUPER!!!

_appassionata_ on Oct 12 '06

Very cool!

lroyce42 on Oct 12 '06

Rockin.

mighty moody mut on Oct 12 '06

a bit toooo smoooth, are you a girl? dunno, have not looked it up, and i will try not to, don't get me wrong, 3!

StrayGhostie on Oct 12 '06

yea, the text somehow just doesn't fit in. maybe just... er... i dunno.

2 days later

doggles on Oct 14 '06

i like the slightly askew blue one. good design!

.onion on Oct 15 '06

I like the illustration. They have large noses.

rocketfire on Oct 15 '06

Vertical looks best. Awesome.

colin_Brights on Oct 16 '06

i love that.

ficketpences on Oct 17 '06

Lovely faces, but I think the text needs a change so it's in harmony with the drawing style. You could select something that looks more like handwriting. (I think your doodled stars and sketchy hair would work well with this sort of alteration).

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