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thx for your comments so far i added something after i submitted this! So here is the other version:
Maybe you more like this one http://www.yme-design.de/x/rainydays_2.jpg |
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yeah her legs look fat. I'm not just saying that because i automatically expected a skinny girl, it looks disproportionate to the rest of her body. But the patterns and everything else are great.
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I think the legs fit very poetically with the rest of the body..I like a lot that, the equilibrium amongs the parts and the idea.
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it bugs me for some reason that the pattern of her skirt doesn't cover the whole skirt shape, like in that one little corner.
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her legs aren't in proportion. that should be a knee length skirt, or she has really long thighs. but i suppose it's poetic that she has odd ligaments?
excellent use of patterns. |
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meh, the strings on v. 2 do not add anything. And yeah, her thighs really ARE too long. And why ARE her feet in holes? Got a lot of potential, not quite realized yet.
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Nice work ! Chek out my submission my darling !
http://www.threadless.com/submission/95608/According_his_head_with_his_heart |
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