I've seen this idea soooo many times on threadless (guns with flowers, planes with doves, bombs with hearts, etc.) I'm all for peace, but I'm not for this design. It looks like it was sketched on the back of a notebook, which sometimes works, but unfortunately I don't think it does here. Sorry, try again.
I agree with schmeltz. With some more attention to the design, and laying out the text by hand, you might be able to get some kind of cool Jay Ryan-ish thing going on, but as-is it needs help. Don't use Base02, that font is gonna be the next papyrus.
BEKKI!!! you are so awesome!! i would so buy this shirt if i had any money. i'd give you a 10 billion if i could but since the scale only goes to 5, i give you that. i hope you get your tee made! that would be so cool and then i could buy your tshirt and that would be so cool. ok well ya awesome tee. i actually love the idea so much. and i like the way it looks sketched and everything. i would definately wear it.
yaybekki!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hey tantrangle b4 u say shit like that about shirts maybe u should show off some of ur own really really good works..
http://www.threadless.com/submission/32546/Novelty/showmore,designs
...yea ps you suck, so go find something worse to suck. MEOW