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this is "when children speak out" re-sub. I made this more natural children thinking. lot of comments and scores needed. Thank you!
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i'd flip the whole image...or the placement...
i think it's more effective 'ending' with the rockstar, since kids don't often say that. great stuff, 5!!! |
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This is awesome. Thank you so much for getting rid of the bride fantasy and replacing it with an astronaut. :)
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ah. I'm glad you went with the astronaut and policeman. the chaotic thoughts made me think that kid wanted to grow up to do drugs rofl. this is muchh better, 4
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I liked the criminal kid in the last one, other than that, the design would look good from left to right with astro, cop, hairmetal.
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i like the childrens dreams better in the other one...but they would have looked better in these bubbles.
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This is better (the bride put me right off on the other one), and I like the suggestion of reversing the sequence of the dreams left to right.
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sorry, I like the old one. the chaos and disorder of one child's thoughts really made that one for me.
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