This is one of my first submissions -- be nice please :-)

good idea, but work on your letter and wordspacing. the "wishes hope joy gifts" line is especially glaring. you may have to rearrange some words to make it work. also consider using a more contemporary typeface.

^^ agreed. Helvetica or something more rounded would work better for this design. I like the idea, though.

Good initial concept, but needs work on the execution. The hyphenated words are awkward to read. Needs tweaking to reach just the right selection and placement of words.

Since most of your words are nouns, it might have been more consistent if ALL the words were nouns. For instance changing "Strong" to "Strength." (even though I know that would make it impossible to have "Last" in front of "Kiss") You also mispelled "Failure."

i enjoy it how it is actually. id buy. 5$

I like the idea. =) I would definitely wear this with the white with black text. However "Failure" is spelled wrong, like shadowcat13 said. And the hyphenated words are distracting, I don't like them too much. :/ It's nice though.

err georgia doesn't look anything like helvetica, one is a serif, the other is a sans. if you're going to do a type tee, you need to know more about typography. have a look at myfonts.com and typophile.com. those are good starting places. good luck!

I didn't mean it like that. I know Georgia looks different. (someone actually recommened that I use that)
How about these choices?

[IMG]http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e63/DesiBhumi/lastkiss.jpg[/IMG]

Placements
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e63/DesiBhumi/shirts.jpg

i think this is wonderfull gurl... i love you... muah muah muah
the only thing i would do is darken the words just a bit....
nevermind... leave it... it will make them come closer to me... heheheheheh... loves ya

I think you covered it all. Art should b perfect when it comes from the soul-which this obviously did, so there is no need to change based on opinions because you designed with passion, DC I would buy!

gr8 design...not sure why ppl did not like it..

I agree with ashmith

Good concept. Be careful of the placement of the heart on the tee.