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Love, Life, Lies, Choices, etc... by bhoomika

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Submitted on:

Oct 02 '06

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575 people

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13 comments

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1.41 out of 5

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by bhoomika

This is one of my first submissions -- be nice please :-)

SovietBot on Oct 02 '06

good idea, but work on your letter and wordspacing. the "wishes hope joy gifts" line is especially glaring. you may have to rearrange some words to make it work. also consider using a more contemporary typeface.

exin on Oct 02 '06

^^ agreed. Helvetica or something more rounded would work better for this design. I like the idea, though.

shadowcat13 on Oct 02 '06

Good initial concept, but needs work on the execution. The hyphenated words are awkward to read. Needs tweaking to reach just the right selection and placement of words.

Since most of your words are nouns, it might have been more consistent if ALL the words were nouns. For instance changing "Strong" to "Strength." (even though I know that would make it impossible to have "Last" in front of "Kiss") You also mispelled "Failure."

limstarr on Oct 02 '06

i enjoy it how it is actually. id buy. 5$

CASSIEUM on Oct 02 '06

I like the idea. =) I would definitely wear this with the white with black text. However "Failure" is spelled wrong, like shadowcat13 said. And the hyphenated words are distracting, I don't like them too much. :/ It's nice though.

bhoomika on Oct 02 '06

Thanks for the suggestions and comments! I will definitely fix the problems that you guys noticed. I think this font works -- I really think that Helvita is over done thats the reason I didn't choose that or Georgia or any font that kind of looks like it.

Any other suggestions ... would be great - Please feel free to let me know.

Thanks for voting!
Please vote for me! This is my first submission!

SovietBot on Oct 02 '06

err georgia doesn't look anything like helvetica, one is a serif, the other is a sans. if you're going to do a type tee, you need to know more about typography. have a look at myfonts.com and typophile.com. those are good starting places. good luck!

bhoomika on Oct 02 '06

I didn't mean it like that. I know Georgia looks different. (someone actually recommened that I use that)
How about these choices?

bhoomika on Oct 02 '06

[IMG]http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e63/DesiBhumi/lastkiss.jpg[/IMG]

bhoomika on Oct 03 '06

Placements
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e63/DesiBhumi/shirts.jpg

kellis on Oct 03 '06

i think this is wonderfull gurl... i love you... muah muah muah
the only thing i would do is darken the words just a bit....
nevermind... leave it... it will make them come closer to me... heheheheheh... loves ya

glowwormy on Oct 03 '06

I think you covered it all. Art should b perfect when it comes from the soul-which this obviously did, so there is no need to change based on opinions because you designed with passion, DC I would buy!

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