this is my first time doing this so please go easy on me. constructive comments (or ideas and tips) are highly appreciated. i'm aware this isn't particularly outstanding, however, i was curious to see how it looked and what others may think of it. be gentle please!

YOU SUCK BITCH! AWFUL DESIGN FUCKER! YOU SUCK! NEVER DRAW AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just kidding... But I doesn't like it.

Good concept. I would like to see more color.

Its okay

It looks like a kids tee with the large design in the middle... maybe put it in the bottom corner and shrink it? Cool idea though