Threadless T-Shirts - Slumber Study

Slumber Study by zzzacck

Scoring finished:

668 days ago

Submitted on:

Sep 18 '06

Scored by:

613 people

Comments:

16 comments

Final average score:

0.91 out of 5

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by zzzacck

This is my first submission. Criticism would be great, just try to go easy. I'm not too good at this.

squintygirl on Sep 18 '06

The desk looks like a box. I think you need to practice a bit more with scale and perspective, but a good first attempt. Keep trying.

aswingkido on Sep 18 '06

Its an interesting idea but i wouldn't wear it. Good try.

stewy on Sep 18 '06

there are way more than 4 colors. keep that in mind for future submissions.

signeturtle on Sep 18 '06

yeah i agree about the desk- it looks so short it seems like the guy doesn't have legs. nice job on the people though! just remember to keep it simple and you'll do great.

Dr0pK1CK on Sep 18 '06

practice drawing to scale.... outline on ppl is a bit too thick

good try and keep it up

asher27 on Sep 18 '06

he looks like hes jerking off.

steve_swartz on Sep 18 '06

he is jerking off: that's what slumber study means.

is that you again, jake?

Larlar on Sep 18 '06

I think there are a total of 12 colors in this.

steve_swartz on Sep 18 '06

I count thirteen:

black, white (coats, etc)
red (one turtleneck)
orange (paperwork)
two blues (bed, boy's pants)
purple (other turtleneck)
six browns (boy's body, desk, chair, two flesh tones, white guy's hair)

steve_swartz on Sep 18 '06

that's why i think it's jake or someone at threadless. how else could it pass through the incoming filter?