Forgot your password?
Not a member yet? Join us!
Resubbed for size. I hope you all dig this one. I'll post a link to the detailed version once it's up and running. Cheers!
Here's a larger version.
love the cloud and the tombstone :) $
Hit me back with feedback. What you like, what you don't like...what you're having for lunch. Dude's gotta get feedback to improve his work.
i like the design, but why the tombstone?
and im having a tuna sammich for lunch
The design is about the life cycle. Flower representing birth, the girl representing life and the tombstone...well, it's a tombstone.
Enjoy ye lunch while ye may.
this is my favorite. eek i want.
oooh, i see.. i guess i didnt see the first post, thanks for the explanation
I like it. 5$
I like the lunchboxbrain.
I would buy a shirt with just that cloud on! Love.
I really like your concept and the whole shirt.
I don't really like the girl's hair though.
(( I know it's petty. ))
the cloud is so cute!
Thanks for the comments. Keep 'em coming!
hm, I didn't realize it was a life cycle-
the flower perhaps blends into the scenery or background - the flower doesnt seem to make a statement of "birth" or life" - it doesn't read as life cycle to me. It does have a square feel going on (it leades my eye around a square shape)
it did though make me wonder, who's grave it is her kite is flying over.? I like the quirky feel to the girl and the cloud, those are quite cute :)
get rid of the tombstone
hmm.. I agree with bluebirdie completely. the girl/cloud/kite are super cute and the flower works, but the tombstone doesn't really fit. it is a pretty cute tombstone though.... and your post reminded me that I'm hungry - thanks! dinnertime.
reminds me of the hellogoodbye website opener. blowin to a city near you.
I had originally planned on putting an old mangy dog where the tombstone was but felt it would be too cutesy.
Excellent feedback. Thanks everyone.
wow u done excellent job!! the colors r lovely!
personally think you should make a whole shirt design with that damn cute cloud. then you'd have a winner. but, its cute in its little way i suppose. though i dont like big designs as a whole, so that puts me off a tad. =/
I looove that cloud !
LOVE the idea. It's a little too cartoony to be absolutely perfect, but still $5 for the concept. I'd really like it on a cream shirt. Oh, and I think the kite string should be taught with the wind blowing like that.
Good call with the kit string eternis. I wrestled with that for awhile as well.
i like it a lot.......and it has a poetic meaning too.
poetic is good
colors are nice and simple
i like the idea, but I would work on the layout. It looks abit squarish now and the whitespace is abit awkward?
You could try varying the sizes of the different things more for a better effect. ie bigger tombstone, smaller cloud/kite..
The layout was/is an issue. I know most folks here prefer smaller designs, but with this illustration, that was difficult to accomplish. I probably could scale it down 10-15%.
Thanks for all the comments everyone!
I like the idea... there's something funny about the girl.
very fun and sweet.
1 Threadbuck = $1 on Threadless stuff. Share anything on Threadless.com with your Internet friends, and if they buy something as a result of your link, you’ll get 3 Threadbucks.
Then you can link to Threadless using your unique username URL to earn 'bucks.
Make sure you're logged in so you can apply your 'bucks as payment during checkout. Ka-ching! They don't expire, so you can save 'em for another time.