The rabbit who ...
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Aug 25 '06
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Are the words on the design? If so, I love it. If not... I think they should be.
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That's twisted. I like!
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If I may: I think it might read better if it read "The rabbit, while seeking" rather than "the rabbit who, while seeking."
Feel free to ignore that, of course, as it's just my opinion. |
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The words is included in the design but I need you to know if it is correct (I can't speak english very well ^.^) - thanks mrhogg !
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if you were trying to make a complete sentence, you failed......but I like it better
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Genius. Inexplicable genius. 5.
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About the text; both would be correct. The meaning would differ, though.
As it is now, it would be "[A story about] The rabbit who found a carrot while seeking his boomerang" And the other, "The rabbit found a carrot while seeking his boomerang" (both with phrases in the sentence turned round, of course. Both are correct.) |
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i liked the first one a lot, the colors and the sort of surreal-ness of the design. This one's good, but, for me, less fun.
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I like the words being on there, because they make the shirt, I just wish the text tied into the design more, visually.
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Cute concept, clumsy sentence.
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I happen to like it just the way it is...
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SO CUTE! They need to take out the word who so it just read "the rabbit, while seeking his boomerang, found a carrot" like it's the middle of a story or some shit.
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I would buy it if the words were on the shirt too.
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This is a complete sentence.
It contains a subject and a predicate. Just needs a period. Great design, though! 5$ |
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it's... not technically a sentence "who" and "while" make those both dependent clauses, all that is one big subject, odd as it may seem.
That said, I LOVE the way it's phrased. Taking out the 'who' would make it seem tres mundane. |
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I love it as it is.
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Exactly. Leave in the 'who'.
Maybe add a "This is" to the front rather than take out the 'who' if you need to, but I don't suggest it. Love it. |
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I love it the way it is! Psh to people trying to be grammatically correct in this. It's better as is. -dances-
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... Thank you for your messages ! That is clear for me, now. And I confirm that this sentence would be printed below the visual one.
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the grammar is perfect with the who kept in it. with the "who" its more of a title than a sentence.
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eeeeeeeeeeee kinjat bau
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The bunny is cute.
The t-shirt is a nice idea. Not sure I'd wear it. |
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Brilliant. Love the orange one.
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i love this especially with the words being included. i would totally buy this
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Thanks !!
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haha good job
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I REALLY LIKE! 5$
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haha..i could almost see a series with this shirt...like..story shirts
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sonmi on Aug 27 '06 how odd! i just submitted a design with a narrative text that also used the "century" font and increased in size on the second line!
so, i like this :> |
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love it. $5
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Perfect as it is. $5 - would be a perfect gift for my girl.
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Adorable. $5
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"with the 'who' its more of a title than a sentence. "
Exactly. As it should be. Lovley :) |
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nice style and colors!
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thanks !!!
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I say the text sounds perfectly fine. It's not normally what you'd say, but it makes it all the more awesome because of that.
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i have questions
why is a rabbit using a boomerang? did it get through the rabbit proof fence? is it even in Austraila? and where did the carrot come from? regardless of my questions and confused state, +4 cause it will be fun to see everyone else just as confused as me... |
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This is brilliance. So beautifully random. $5.
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Lovvvess it!
although i'm just as confused on the concept as superallie $5 anyways |
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i like the colour choices except the blue background
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Australia would love to be rid of rabbits forever. As in none of the furry little buggers anywhere.
I like the shirt though |
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Oh wow, this shirt is adorable! I would definately wear it!
Great job! |
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http://www.creadream.com/apercu_carotte_3.gif
really good |
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I hope the words on the tee. It's vair vair indie
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Both the illustration and the "quote" are completely inane and meaingless. Everyone who thinks this is a good design is obviously not well versed in design and anyone who would wear this would be no friend of mine.
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hehe, I like it, 5!
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theequalizer> "... anyone who would wear this would be no friend of mine" ... I am rather surprised to see as much oral violence on this site. Don't like this is a thing, but it's sad to arrive from there at such remarks. In any case, I'll not make you a friend, that's sure ...
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superallie > One often associates the rabbit and the carrot. I wanted to divert the concept. So, these is precisely these questions which make the interest of the visual one, because "A rabbit with a boomerang" is a surrealist situation enough. Sorry for my poor english, I try to make it more clearly ;)
all> A big "Thanks" for your votes & coms !!! |
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I am still hoping that the other one gets printed. Good luck!
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Love it !!!! 5$
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It totally rocks as it is. Rabbit shirts rule. It would need to come in kids sizes too. If I had this and my little girls didn't they would make my life hell.
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i love nonsense.
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great stuff :)
i probably wouldn't wear this though...but i'll give it a 5$ anyway :) |
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thanks all !
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I love it and the fact that it is totally random makes me love it all the more!! Definitely a 5$
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Usually I don't go for things with simplistic art like this, but the text totally makes me want this shirt.
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:)
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wacky crazy idea. I think the typeface and its layout let it down some. That is if the type is to appear underneath.
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someone tell me what this is about?
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love it in green, blue, and orange
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a wtf worthy a 5
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