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deadpuppy
let's all hope drips, circles and arrows aren't the next step in design evolution.
deadpuppy
deadpuppy on Jun 23 '03
yeah i know... it sucks.
gerald
gerald on Jun 23 '03
a lot.
deadpuppy
deadpuppy on Jun 23 '03
always good to know you agree gerald :)
deadpuppy
deadpuppy on Jun 23 '03
now does anybody have some constructive critisism? i'd apreiciate it
fn0rdianslip
fn0rdianslip on Jun 23 '03
I think the pixelization can use some work. The pixes should be on the inside as well as the outside of the forms, and I'd stay away from white, they look more like cut-outs than pixelized. Its a good concept.
Lose the text. Completely lose the text, its so beyond redundant I cant express how beyond redundant it is.

The thing that makes arrows, x's and circles aesthetically successful in other designs are their combination with other elements, and their overtaking of images, recreating and commenting on the aural and visual confusion that comes with the rapid expansion of media, information and digitalization in our society. I'm hoping that this doesn't become an overused concept (it only works in designs that I've seen that implement it hinting at this idea, or other ideas, or some idea that works and is not just aesthetic), but it totally applies to this concept. Personally I think that the circles should begin at the first ape and progress into a complex amalgamation of circles, arrows, blah blah blah telling you exactly what to do blah blah blah do it my way blah I'm so fucking smart blah blah.
Whatever, hope it helps.
deadpuppy
deadpuppy on Jun 23 '03
wow! thank you! that helped a lot!
fn0rdianslip
fn0rdianslip on Jun 23 '03
Cool, no problem.

But I'm totally stealing my idea for a design, so if you see a monkey-man design that looks like I described, well, deal :)
jerm
jerm on Jun 24 '03
Ah ha ha, fucking brilliant Mr Puppy.
and to fn0rdianslip - circles arrows and drips NEVER work.
EVER.

Can everyone please leave them alone and do something original, except you Mr Puppy, you may keep taking the piss.
Trinity
Trinity on Jun 24 '03
I like it :) It would definitely be improved by losing the text and making the degenerate forms black and grey only, without the messy white stuff.
wick
wick on Jun 25 '03
actually I think circles arrows etc DID work very very well. The reason everyone is sick of them is because they got used way too much. back in the day there was awesome work using what are now cliched elements
You cant really use them seriously anymore tho i dont think
but there should deffinately be more pisstakes
Ronin60
   Ronin60 on Jun 25 '03
my friend yuto says he might of bought that tee if he saw in the shops today; so it must be clicking some peoples boots. I personally just see it as a nice design so keep up the good work :)
tmx
tmx on Jun 25 '03
how about making the guy on the right the "man" symbol/icon, as seen on toilet doors the world over?
lawless
lawless on Jun 26 '03
Overall I think it's a valid concept. I agree that the pixelization could use some work and possibly forego the text. But I like the overall idea. I would be scared to wear this shirt, fearing that someone would punch me in my left kidney, for all the arrows pointing at it.
Kohr
Kohr on Jun 27 '03
Keep the text but have the letters dissolve around "tio" when people decided to quit reading.
312 days later
deadpuppy
deadpuppy on May 04 '04
wow, i just like know no one has looked at this in like, over a year now, but i would just like to inform the world that i happen to be a Ms. Puppy. thank you very much. >_<
3 days later
thingsmatter
thingsmatter on May 07 '04
I looked at it. Ha.
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