Scoring finished:
744 days ago
Submitted on:
Aug 18 '06
Scored by:
2,168 people
Comments:
56 comments
Final average score:
2.17 out of 5
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I don't like how it's all square, I get that it's supposed to look like a comicbook though. Also, shouldn't a comicbook be a little less wide?
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A: It's square because it's a book cover. I haven't seen too many round or triangular ones.
B: It's not a comic book cover. It's wider because it's a dimestore detective pulp magazine. |
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The URL in the first post is jacked up. It's actually http://www.5thrangersclan.com/Hillbilly's%20personal%20files/issue1-detail.jpg
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i was gonna say you stole this from "Noir is french for Black," but then i noticed that that is also your design. even so, using an old design in a new one, not so good.
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This is a really vintage look and the colors blend well together. If you drew this, you deserve some major props. I personally don't think I'd buy it though.
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Great design. Of course it is vintage pulp style and that makes perfect sense to have in a square. I see nothing wrong with using elements from your former works, good design is good design .
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this is pretty amazing.
it would be better if it wasn't so obviously the cover. besides that i love it. i like how the vacancy sign says noir. $5 |
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This is nice, just a few ideas, make the gun smoking, make the blood spot and vacancy red, maybe the word thrilling red?
Good work! |
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I think I'd like it better if the corners were frayed and worn like the rest of the book. I don't think it should have perfect edges but ratty everywhere else.
I love pulp novel covers though. 4 |
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I love this design, I don't know what roman(^) is talking about. maybe put something behind the book...something to take some of the hard edges off.
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I like it, but it would be even better if the cover took up the entire front of the shirt. A rectangle in the middle of your chest is just odd looking.
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Excellent, excellent illustration!
Just rotate it slightly, so it's not so tacked on looking. As it stands, it kinda looks like someone stuck a really sweet sticker on your shirt. |
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Gracias to everyone for the positive feedback.
I'm taking your suggestions to heart. I think I'll resub this again with some rounded/torn corners. And I've got something else in mind, too. |
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