Yup. Please, comment.

I know the feeling...

I like the illustration but I think maybe a different color of the shirt so it would scream out abit more...

different font would work better.

Run that shit through illustrator and direct the font to make it mesh more with the contours...if you want.

lettering maybe better than this,
what about erasing the vertical line?

yes. eliminate the cropped areas, finish the top of the head, and extend his/her neck down some.

no cropped lines

Not a big fan of the colours. The design is good.

Hey, I'd just scrap the text.

Typography don't works, just leave the image alone...and that will be good

i like the illustration, and the text is okay too, but i think you should make the illustration bigger, lose the white outline, and have the text underneath the picture. you could put the text going from top to bottom on the right side of the pic too.

cheers.